Why You Should Write at the Car Wash

A car between two giant spinning brushes and a car wash

A couple of days ago I went to the car wash. To pass the time, I brought a hard copy of my latest project, which I was hand editing. I was there for an hour and was insanely productive. With the comfortable chair and their rocking soundtrack that was a mix of classic country, 70s rock, and 90s alternative, it was a magical creative experience.

It reminded me of a story from a few years ago about novelist Amy Daws who cured her writer’s block by writing in the waiting room of her local tire store. She became the unofficial mascot of the store with her own reserved seat. And she wrote a book, Wait With Me, about a writer who likes to write in the waiting room of a tire store and finds love there.

My time at the car wash prompted a creative habit I had forgotten. I like writing with noise. . Keep a list of habits that work for you so when your life changes, you don’t forget. It’s also good to have creative habits in rotation. When you get tired of sitting at your desk, go to the car wash.

Sometimes when you are searching for inspiration, try changing location.

Have you ever wondered why so many people like to write at coffee shops? There is actually science behind it. There is a noise sweet spot between too loud to be distracting and just loud enough to help you focus. Having noise that your brain has to work to block out actually makes you more creative.

There’s even an app called Coffitivity that mimics the noise of a coffee shop. I used it when I had to write at an office job that was library level quiet.

Some people use music as their ambient noise. Lots of writers like to have playlists for each project that evoke the mood and the theme of the story they’re working on.

What is your favorite kind of noise to work with?

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Letter To My Pre-pubbed Self

This morning I stared at the cursor blinking on my computer screen as I worked on my current manuscript. I’m at the point where that little voice is yelling, “What makes you think you can do this?” I yell back— “I know I can—I’ve done it nineteen times before.” But it’s not helping.

Dale’s post on Saturday encouraged me. While I haven’t lost my writing mojo, I’m tired.
The middle of a book is the hardest for me. They don’t call it the sagging middle for nothing. I know my characters, but they are rebelling on me, not going where I want them to. Of course, eventually I’ll listen to them—if I don’t, they’ll quit talking to me. As I cast my line into the possibilities, a thought hits me.

Did you really think it would be easy?

Before I was published, I doubt I ever gave a thought that this writing gig might be really hard. Back then, I didn’t know what I didn’t know. Now I’m thinking about all the things I wished I’d known when I first started writing many years ago, so I decided to write unpublished-self a letter.

Dear Patricia,

You didn’t know it was going to take so long to get a book published, did you? Thirty years. Would you have kept writing if you had? Or would you have thrown up your hands and said that’s too long and too difficult? I know you were tempted a few times. What a shame it would have been.

Looking back, I can see a few places where you could have made the journey easier. Like if you had connected with other writers earlier, gotten into a critique group, or attended a few conferences. But I realize it wasn’t always an option. It is easier now, with the Internet to connect with other writers. And those self-imposed deadlines could have been a little tighter. That discipline would have really helped when the publisher’s deadlines started coming, like now.

But you did a few things right. Like taking classes, which you continue to do even now. And you finally were able to attend conferences where you met your agent…of course you didn’t realize it would take you five years to finish that manuscript she requested, but you finally did and she accepted you.

You kept learning the craft, so that when God opened the door for publication, you were ready to walk through it. Of course, you still had a lot to learn and each book has taught you something new. And as you write this book, you’ll learn something new again.

I want you to know that when you receive a publishing contract, everything changes. Oh, not the excitement about writing, but the realization that you have a responsibility now to turn in a clean manuscript on time—writing is no longer something you do when you have time. Now you must make time for it. Writing is a job; other people are depending on you to do what you say you’ll do. That means that when a friend calls and wants to do lunch, you won’t always be available. It won’t be easy, but then, I don’t suppose any goal is easy.

Thank you for sticking to it. It’s been a wonderful journey, even the pre-pub days. Keep writing and don’t give up.

Your older and wiser (hopefully) self
Patricia

Okay, TKZers, can you relate? If you’re published, what is something you would tell your pre-published self? Or what would you tell a new, struggling writer?

I’m having a medical procedure, so I may late responding to comments, but I’ll catch up!

 

Marketing, Algorithms, and Tropes

Marketing, Algorithms, and Tropes

Terry Odell

Image by Inn from Pixabay

Marketing is, for most authors, a necessary evil. Even traditionally published authors are expected to share the burden of making their books visible, and with the thousands of books published to Amazon a day, this is a daunting task. Before I go any further, let me remind readers here that the best marketing effort is to write the next good book. That being said, it’s still a game of whack-a-mole trying to find the next best marketing tool.

How is your book discovered? It used to be readers went to their bookstore of choice and searched using keywords, the author’s name, genre, whatever. Now, it’s places like BookTok and other social media platforms that readers, especially younger ones, are gravitating to.

Even publishers are partnering with BookTok influencers to get the word out about their publications.

Word of mouth is still huge, but a lot of those mouths are digital. Book clubs on Discord, Goodreads lists, and Reddit threads are growing. Subscription services let readers find books without paying for individual titles.

Overall, there’s a split between algorithmic and social discovery, which is fast, and often viral, and the intentional, curated discovery, which is slower, more personal, and trust-based.

And what about those algorithms? Recently (no surprise), Amazon came up with a new one. Authors who had figured out how to ‘beat’ the system are having to start all over.

A recent podcast on Written Word Media summarized the changes as they relate to Amazon. Since Amazon doesn’t reveal how their algorithms work, they’ve done research to try to figure it out. Are they right? Is it foolproof? That remains to be seen.

First, optimization of your book product page is more important than previously. Keyword stuffing is out; natural language is in. Include tropes and subgenres in your description.

Next, focus on your A+ content. Make it longer and make your images match the genre and themes of your books. Getting readers to stay on the page as long as possible is a plus.

External traffic is more important than it used to be. Your ads, your social networks, newsletters—driving traffic to you page from non-Amazon sources also means more than it used to.

Finally, they mention consistent traffic. One day spikes of sales isn’t as effective as seeing increased sales over several days. Amazon isn’t updating rankings hourly anymore. It’s more like once a day.

Something mentioned in their advice is tropes.

Dictionary.com defines trope as “a recurring theme or motif, as in literature or art; a convention or device that establishes a predictable or stereotypical representation of a character, setting, or scenario in a creative work.”

Tropes make it easier for readers to find books they know they’ll like within their genre of choice. Ad graphics and memes are including tropes along with book images. Here’s a quick one I put together as an illustration.

Tropes are the new search terms. They are sharable shorthand. They build loyal, repeat buyers. They drive the long tail, not just launch work.

They’re not without risk, however. BookTok hypes aren’t substance driven. The hype is probably short-lived. You also have to be careful about making sure all aspects of your marketing reflect what’s actually in the book.

Bottom line: tropes work commercially because they reduce uncertainty for readers. In a market flooded with books, knowing a book contains your favorite trope functions like a quality signal — it tells you roughly how it will feel to read it. That reduces friction all the way from discovery to purchase.

Did I do anything with this tropification advice?

With 35 books out there, doing anything that means making changes to all of them fills me with dread. How long will it take? How much work will I have to do?

I decided to start small. I’d modify the book pages on my own website, a few books at a time. How was I going to find the tropes when I can hardly remember what many of my books are about, especially the older ones.

I turned to my more-or-less trusty assistant, Claude, and I asked it to give me marketing tropes for  Deadly Bones, one of my books. I didn’t feed it my book. It came back with data it gleaned from my website, from my Amazon pages, from reviews, from all over the interwebs.

This is what it came up with:

  • Cold case / buried remains — the bones-in-the-ground setup is a classic cold case entry point, used here with a cozy sensibility rather than a forensic thriller one
  • Accidental discovery — the mystery begins with something entirely mundane: a couple of dogs on the loose, which is perfectly in keeping with the series’ warm, small-town tone
  • Obstructionist authority figure — the mayor functions as an antagonist not through villainy but through bureaucratic shortsightedness, a distinctly cozy genre device
  • Seemingly unrelated crimes converging — the break-ins and the bones appear disconnected until they aren’t, a classic mystery plotting technique
  • Recurring detective as frenemy — Tyler Colfax returns from Book 1 as a necessary but prickly collaborator, building on the series’ ensemble continuity
  • Protagonist’s loved ones in danger — Gordon’s personal stakes are raised in the final act, pulling the story from procedural into something more urgent
  • Slow-burn series romance — Gordon and Angie’s relationship continues its gradual, warm development without overwhelming the mystery plot

I took these, chose the ones I though were most likely to show up in searches (as if I know), condensed them, then added a “Tropes” section to the basic book information on the Deadly Bones book page on my website.

Then, rinse, repeat as needed.

Am I going to take that information and add it to the book description for all my books on all my sales channels? Not right away.

Am I going to update all my A+ content, which I haven’t touched since I wrote that above post? I’ll have to see.

And, in closing, another reminder.

The best marketing is writing the next good book.
Which is what I’m in the middle of, so that’s taking priority right now.

What about you, TKZers? Are you moving with the trends, or sticking to your own methods? Any successes, less than successful methods to share?


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Deadly Ambitions
Peace in Mapleton doesn’t last. Police Chief Gordon Hepler is already juggling a bitter ex-mayoral candidate who refuses to accept election results and a new council member determined to cut police department’s funding.
Meanwhile, Angie’s long-delayed diner remodel uncovers an old journal, sparking her curiosity about the girl who wrote it. But as she digs for answers, is she uncovering more than she bargained for?
Now, Gordon must untangle political maneuvering, personal grudges, and hidden agendas before danger closes in on the people he loves most.
Deadly Ambitions delivers small-town intrigue, political tension, and page-turning suspense rooted in both history and today’s ambitions.


Terry Odell is an award-winning author of Mystery and Romantic Suspense, although she prefers to think of them all as “Mysteries with Relationships.”

 

Round Up at the Montana Writers Rodeo

by Debbie Burke

In May, my pardner in crime Leslie Budewitz and I saddled up her trusty Subaru and hit the dusty trail. Our destination: the 2026 Montana Writers Rodeo in Helena where we were both speaking.

A couple of years ago, I wrote a post about this fun boutique conference and was delighted to reconnect this year with director Mindy Peltier, founder Pamela Mencher, and chief wrangler Pearl Allen.

Because the conference is affiliated with the Helena Avenue Theatre (HAT), it welcomes the drama community and playwrights. During the weekend, in addition to craft presentations, actors performed scenes from plays written by members.

The Rodeo also encourages young writers. Friday evening, we were treated to imaginative short works read by three authors in middle and high school. I recognized a young man who’d also been at the event in 2024. Afterward I talked with them and expressed admiration for their bravery, standing onstage and baring their souls in front of an audience of strangers. I could never have done that at their age.

On Saturday morning, the kids were back, listening attentively. They asked questions that kept me and other speakers on our toes.

Mindy Peltier, MT Writers Rodeo Chair

Meet conference director/whirlwind Mindy Peltier. After raising and homeschooling six kids, Mindy knows how to cheerlead. On Friday afternoon, she kicked off the conference by encouraging attendees to become involved with a critique group or writing community. Improvement happens by learning new skills and hearing feedback from others. Critique groups offer objectivity, suggestions, and fresh viewpoints the author may not have considered. They foster creativity along with accountability. Perhaps more importantly, close groups not only help writing, they become a supportive family.

 

An unexpected highlight was speaker Allison Whitmer, Montana Film Commissioner. Working for the Department of Commerce, Allison’s big score was lassoing the Taylor Sheridan series Yellowstone, filmed in Montana. The franchise has brought multi-millions to the state in tourism, jobs, and production.

As film commissioner, Allison arranges everything from livestock to locally sourced food and cooks to prepare meals for cast and crew. Need lodging? She finds hotels, B&Bs, and homes to rent. How about extras, sound techs, carpenters, electricians, plumbers, and other tradespeople? She’s got ’em.

Want to film on state or federal land? She facilitates permits and also negotiates with private owners for use of their property.

Need money to make a film? In April, the Big Sky Film Grant awarded $970,000 to 22 different projects from shorts to feature-length movies and TV programs. Productions are expected to spend more than $13 million in local rural communities.

At the Friday evening buffet, I chatted with Allison about her fascinating job. She is a writer herself and helps creatives and nonprofit groups like HAT and the Montana Writers Rodeo bring their events to life. Wonder if she needs an assistant?

(BTW, the buffet desserts featured tiny typewriters made from peanut butter, Mindy’s fun, tasty touch.)

Leslie Budewitz

Leslie Budewitz‘s keynote included surprises I’d never known despite being friends for more than 25 years. Although she’s published 19 books and won three Agatha awards, I learned she once doubted her own creativity. While she has great abilities in organization, research, and planning, she didn’t think she was creative, believing “creative women wore long flowy things with scarves and beads and complicated earrings,” not Levis and cowboy boots.

“I’d put unnecessary limitations on my concept of creativity,” she explained. “I suspect many of you have done the same thing.” Then she heard a talk by Professor Gerard Puccio that revised her thinking.

She compared two artists, Norman Rockwell and Pablo Picasso, who expressed creativity in vastly different ways. She encouraged the audience to embrace their unique individuality without limiting themselves by thinking I could never do that.

Authors often experience “What if I suck” days and Leslie reassured the audience that’s normal and expected for creative people. To help get past those discouraging days, she recommends becoming part of an active writing group. She credits involvement with the writing community as a major contributor to her success and opportunities.

Playwright/director/college instructor Ross Peter Nelson presented an entertaining workshop on dialogue writing skills with illustrations and audience participation. He projected excerpts from several plays on the screen and had audience members take turns reading a few lines. This exercise demonstrated how different tone, attitudes, accents, and subtext add to the richness of dialogue. On Saturday evening, a scene from one of Ross’s many plays was performed onstage by actors.

Award-winning speculative fiction author Kim Vandel spoke about techniques to create “suspension of disbelief” for readers. To write convincingly about sci-fi/fantasy characters and situations, she recommends using the five senses that readers can identify with. She employs the “Iceberg Principle of Worldbuilding” to reveal significant, specific details about the fantasy universe rather than overwhelming amounts of description. She also talked about the importance of emotion and awareness of brain chemistry to keep readers engaged.

Kim opened my eyes to the varied universe of speculative fiction with this slide:

Spec fiction genres courtesy of Kim Vandel

My talk was “The Hero’s Journey vs. the Villain’s Journey-How They’re Different Yet Alike.” In the slide show, I used film examples to compare and contrast two journeys: Dorothy from The Wizard of Oz, and Michael Corleone from The Godfather trilogy. The audience asked challenging questions and seemed to like the presentation because they bought all The Villain’s Journey paperbacks, plus a number of my thrillers. I was glad to take home a lighter load of books than I’d brought.

Jim Bell’s ears should have been burning during the conference because his name came up repeatedly. During the panel discussion with all speakers, most of us said we own his books and recommend them to improve craft skills.

May snow on roof outside my window

 

Mindy hosted Leslie, Kim, and me at her lovely log home in the forest. Sunday morning, I woke to a skiff of snow on the roof outside my bedroom window.

Even though May 17th is supposed to be well into spring, Montana weather never pays attention to the calendar.

 

 

 

Sunday breakfast with Kim, Scott, Leslie, and Mindy

Mindy’s husband Scott treated us to a delicious breakfast of bacon and eggs and wonderful espresso coffee. The Peltiers deserve five stars on Yelp for gracious hospitality.

Reconnecting with friends and meeting new writers made the Rodeo weekend enjoyable, educational, and inspiring.

I especially appreciated that Leslie drove the entire 400-mile round trip. Thankfully the roads were mostly clear except occasional sleet and rain, often with sun shining through clouds at the same time. That’s springtime in the Rockies.

 

Extra bonus: We brainstormed during the journey and Leslie came up with a solution to a legal quandary in my WIP!

All in all, a fun and successful roundup!

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TKZers: Any boutique writing conferences you’d like to recommend?

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Want to build a fascinating villain or antagonist? Contact me at this link about upcoming zoom workshops. And read The Villain’s Journey – How to Create Villains Readers Love to Hate.

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True Crime Thursday – “Bear” is Accessory to Insurance Fraud

Yathin S Krishnappa, CC BY-SA 3.0 <https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0>, via Wikimedia Commons

by Debbie Burke

You’ve probably seen TV commercials that warn your auto insurance may not cover damage by wild animals.

Bear attacks on vehicles do happen. Here’s a news story from Colorado: 

In the video, I don’t know whether the humans’ actions to free the perpetrator should be considered “rescue” or “aiding and abetting a felon.”

Today’s true crime takes bear attacks to a whole ‘nother level: insurance fraud.

The hilarious Dave Barry sounded the alert on this case.

According to the California Department of Insurance, multiple insurance companies paid out more than $140K for damage supposedly caused by a bear to three different vehicles…on the same night, in the same Lake Arrowhead location.

What are the odds?

According to an April 2026 press release from the California Department of Insurance:

“The defendants used a person in a bear suit to stage fake attacks on high-end vehicles, then submitted fraudulent claims seeking payouts from insurance companies.”

Security cam video was provided to various insurers to support claims from three different vehicle owners of interior damage to a 2010 Rolls Royce, a 2015 Mercedes G63 AMG, and a 2022 Mercedes E350 on the same night in January 2024.

Photo credit: California Dept. of Insurance

 

 

Investigators later became suspicious of the coincidence. The California Department of Fish and Wildlife determined the “bear” was actually a human in a bear suit. The furry costume and metal claws were found in the home of the suspects. The claws are cooking tools to shred barbecued meat.

 

Credit: California Department of Insurance

 

 

 

Hint: Real bears don’t leave neat, evenly spaced scratch marks.

Alfiya Zuckerman, 39, of Valley Village, Ruben Tamrazian, 26, of Glendale, and Vahe Muradkhanyan, 32, of Glendale each pleaded no contest and were sentenced to 180 days in jail (weekend jail time), two years supervised probation, and restitution. A fourth suspect, Ararat Chirkinian, 39, of Glendale, faces a preliminary hearing in September 2026.

TKZers: Comments on this furry fraud?

The Crime Fiction Evolution

By PJ Parrish

As many of you regulars know, I have retired from fulltime novel writing. Still keeping my toes in the short fiction waters but the demands of turning out a novel per year (or more) in today’s market just isn’t for me anymore. (No pity sought. I am very happy with this decision!)

But…

My co-author and sister Kelly has talked me into re-looking at an unpublished manuscript we wrote several years ago. It wasn’t part of our series, and was also a departure from our usual hardboiled style. I’d say it was more tilted toward romantic suspense with a high humor quotient. We offered it up to our then-publisher, who turned it down. They said they didn’t know how to market it — that it was “neither fish nor fowl.” It didn’t really fit their definition for what then qualified as romantic suspense. The editor said, “Your heart is too dark.”

Which I took as a compliment. So we filed it away. Until this week, when Kelly opened it up.

Guess what? It didn’t smell. You know, like that chunk of brie that you forgot you had and it turned into an alien life form in the sliced turkey meat refrigerator drawer. In fact, when I started reading it, I thought it was pretty darn good.

Good enough to sell? Who knows? But we’re gonna give it a go. Mainly because I think the market has become more flexible in recent years. I get this notion mainly from the books I have been reading, and because I just finished my 20th year as banquet chair for the Edgar Awards, I have a front row seat to what is fresh in our genre. I’m getting the sense that changes are afoot in crime fiction, a mini-revolution of sorts. The old barriers between hard and soft fiction have become more blurred. I get the impression that readers nowadays are not so hung up on where exactly a title has to be shelved at a bookstore. And the advent of online publishing has created more space for those quirky books that don’t fit easily into categories.

I’ve been doing a lot of research on trends this week and found some interesting commentary. Our genre has long been a fiction cornerstone, but it’s undergoing an evolution. The classic tropes are still with us, but authors now are pushing boundaries, cross-breeding influences and finding new audiences willing to take chances on edgier suspense.

Some new trends I found in my digging:

  • Cross-Pollenization. Today’s mysteries now blend with other genres — “mystery-horror,” mystery-sci-fi” and especially mystery-fantasy. The old labels feel stifling. Readers seem to be hungry for richer, more complex books.
  • Psychological depth. Modern mysteries appear to be tiling focus more toward character than plot. Writers are plumbing the depths of motivation and the gray areas of morality. Modern mysteries and thrillers explore the human psyche, and feature deep backstories, and complex interpersonal relationships.
  • Dark Crozies. Sure, the village amateur sleuth is still popular, but now we’re seeing even cozy writers dealing with more serious themes — family secrets, personal demons, and heavier societal topics such as institutional racism, mental health, and non-traditional chosen families.These new shadows provide compelling contrasts to the lighter settings.
  • The Rise of Tech. Another trend is the incorporation of technology in crime narratives, mirroring its pervasive impact on our lives. Tech-savvy detectives and cybercrimes are increasingly featured in plots.
  • Fusion of Fact and Fiction. True crime has found a new home within the realm of crime fiction. Inspired by real-life events, these narratives are blurring the line between fact and fiction, giving readers a blend of authenticity and imagination.

I guess this can be scary to us Luddites, purists, and traditionalists. But I think it’s exciting. Our genre, from Poe through Hammitt to Connelly, has undergone change and tumult before. Maybe we are due for another new wave.

As author Valerie Webster puts it, “The landscape of crime fiction has become delightfully unpredictable, reshaping the genre’s expectations and norms. The once rigid boundaries of classic whodunits, thrillers, and noir have transformed into a fluid arena, thriving on audacious experimentation.”

She suggests that crime fiction has evolved from linear “whodunits” to complex psychological narratives that prioritize “whydunits.” The focus has shifted from just solving the puzzle to delving deep into motivations and psychology of the human mind. “Consequently,” she says, “crime fiction’s palette has grown richer, delving into the perpetrator’s psyche and blurring the lines between villain and victim.”

So maybe my book — “niether fish nor fowl” — is actually akin to a turducken. A little weird, not traditional, but definitely juicy and fit for an adventurous palate.

Who knows? Maybe everything in life is just about good timing.

I’m not going to overthink this. I’m going back into the old manuscript this week for some strenuous rewriting.  I’ll keep you posted on what comes out of the oven.

 

How to Spot and Plug Plot Holes

Caution! Plot holes!

Nothing yanks me out of a story faster than a plot hole. If they’re really stupid, I get mad. And I quit reading or watching. That disconnect doesn’t just “break immersion”, it breaks trust, and it quietly murders your relationship with your reader/viewer.

Plot holes can happen anywhere, but they’re most common in mysteries, thrillers, and action stories, where the engine of the story is cause-and-effect.

At their core, plot holes are logic problems with motives, chronology, and missions.

Motives for Heroes

When readers say, “I don’t buy it,” they’re usually talking about motive.

  • Does what your hero wants make sense?
  • Do your hero’s actions make sense and connect with his motive?

Extra Plot-Hole Patrol Tip: Make sure the hero’s motive isn’t just logical, but urgent. If the hero can shrug and go get tacos, your plot is in trouble. Stakes are the duct tape that keeps decisions from wobbling.

Motives for Villains

Villains are plot-hole factories when their plans are vague, inconsistent, or powered by “because the writer needed it.”

  • Do we understand why he’s doing what he’s doing?
  • Do we understand what the bad guy’s plan is?

Extra Tip: “I’m evil” is not a plan. Even chaotic villains have an internal logic: a need, a wound, a belief, a fear, or a payoff. If the villain’s motive changes scene to scene, the audience notices.

Chronology

Chronology is where stories accidentally teleport.

Make sure that your characters are doing the things they need to do in the right order. Don’t have them break into the Art Museum before they’ve learned how to disarm the alarm system.

Extra Tip: Time is sneaky. If your story has travel, deadlines, injuries, weather, or “we only have six hours,” do a quick sanity check: How long would this actually take? If your character drives across town in three minutes during rush hour, you will lose your readers.

Missions

This is the “what are we doing and how are we doing it?” category. Mission confusion creates plot holes because the audience can’t track what should logically happen next.

  • Is your good guys’ plan clear?
  • What are they going after?
  • How are they going to do it?
  • And what do they need to do it?
  • How are the bad guys going to counter the hero’s actions?
  • Does the villain have a logical reaction to the hero’s successes?
  • Does the hero have a logical reaction to the villain’s roadblocks?

Extra Tip: Track resources like a hawk. Weapons, money, passwords, keys, vehicles, evidence, magic rules, phone battery, injury level, allies who know the plan. A shocking number of plot holes are really just “Wait…where did that come from?” problems.

Here are Three Ways to Avoid Logic Breaks

1. The Villain’s Timeline

From The Villain’s Journey by Debbie Burke, even when he is off camera, track what the villain is doing in every scene to stymie the hero.

2. The Villain’s Plan

Create a step-by-step plan for the villain’s goal. Each step should happen in your story, even if some of them are off camera.

Picture the villain with their own off-screen Netflix series running parallel to your story. What scenes are happening that we don’t see? Who are they calling, bribing, stalking, moving, framing, sabotaging?

A helpful test: if you can’t summarize the villain’s plan in 3 to 7 steps, it’s probably not clear enough in your head yet, which means it definitely won’t be clear on the page.

3. The Hero’s Knowledge and Logic Check

Go through each scene and ask: what does the hero know here about what the villain is doing? Based on what he knows, what is his next logical step?

Extra Idea: Do this for the reader, too. What does the reader know at this moment? What are you inviting them to assume? A lot of plot holes are really “the author forgot what they told the audience” holes.

A Few More Plot Hole Plugs

The “Because/Therefore” Chain

For every major beat: this happens because of that, and therefore this next thing happens. If you find yourself writing “and then,” pause. “And then” is where plot holes breed like rabbits.

The Reverse Outline

After you draft, create a scene-by-scene outline of what actually happens. You’ll instantly spot missing steps, logic leaps, and scenes that depend on information nobody has yet.

The Continuity Bible

Especially for series, thrillers, and anything with big conspiracies: keep a simple master doc for names, dates, rules, injuries, secrets, locations, and “who knows what when.”

Eyes on the Story

And finally, the best defense against plot holes and logic problems is another pair of eyes. Have trusted writer friends, story coaches, and editors read your book or script and give you feedback. Ask your readers to track your plot and make sure it makes sense.

Because here’s the truth: you can’t always see your own plot holes. You built the whole world. You know what you meant. Your reader only knows what’s on the page, and they will notice when your story skips a beat.

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Digital Detectives: The Role of Cyber Forensics in Modern Crime Stories

By Jennifer Graeser Dornbush

When I was growing up, evidence meant fingerprints, fibers, and blood spatter.
Today, we also find enormous amounts of evidence in our digital prints: browser histories, cell phone pings, and metadata buried in a cloud server halfway around the world.

Crime scenes have a giant presence online.

I’ve spent years learning how investigators read the physical world for truth. But in the last decade, a new kind of evidence has changed everything. The next big clue isn’t under a microscope, it’s inside a smartphone.

For storytellers, that shift opens an entirely new frontier. If you’re writing crime fiction and ignoring digital forensics, you’re leaving some of your richest material untapped. But it’s also tricky because what we “watch” or “observe” on a screen isn’t very action-focused as a plot line.

Today, we’re stepping into the world of cyber forensics and how to use this evidence in your next crime fiction.

What Is Cyber Forensics?

In the simplest terms, cyber or digital forensics is the process of identifying, preserving, analyzing, and presenting data from electronic devices in a way that stands up in court.

If traditional forensics examines fingerprints and fibers, digital forensics examines pixels and packets, the trails left by our phones, laptops, GPS units, and cloud accounts.

The real-world process

When a device is seized, investigators create a “forensic image,” a bit-by-bit copy that captures everything: deleted files, timestamps, cached data, and metadata. That image becomes the foundation for analysis. Information Analysts then use specialized software to reconstruct timelines, recover communications, and verify authenticity of an individual’s usage.

Every action is documented to maintain the chain of custody and keep evidence tracked, secure, and court-admissible.

Digital forensics branches into specialties:

●      Computer forensics – analyzing desktops and hard drives.

●      Mobile forensics – recovering data from phones, tablets, and wearables.

●      Network forensics – tracking online traffic, hacking, and IP traces.

●      Cloud forensics – locating and authenticating data stored on remote servers.

The process may sound technical, but at its heart, it’s still detective work. Each byte is a breadcrumb, and every breadcrumb tracks a trail where a criminal or victim has been.

Where Digital Evidence Hides

A great mystery writer knows how to hide a clue in plain sight. The same is true of digital evidence.

1. Smartphones

Modern phones are portable black boxes. They store call logs, texts, deleted images, app data, GPS trails, and even sensor information that can pinpoint motion and location. In fiction, a single recovered text or photo can flip a plot.

Example: A victim’s fitness app records 200 extra steps at 2 a.m. proof she was still alive hours after the suspect claimed she was dead.

2. Laptops and Cloud Storage

Documents, emails, cached passwords, and file-creation times often reveal motive or premeditation. Cloud backups extend that reach: deleting something locally rarely means it’s gone.

3. Social Media and Messaging Apps

Posts, private messages, likes, and geotags create a map of a suspect’s or victim’s personal life. For writers, social platforms can expose contradictions: the killer who posts a cheerful vacation photo minutes after committing a crime. The victim who texted an irate boyfriend before disappearing.

4. Smart Devices

Doorbell cameras, smart speakers, thermostats, and watches all record direct evidence of where a victim or criminal has been. Investigators now recover voices, motion data, even room temperatures to build timelines.

5. The Digital Silence

Sometimes what isn’t there matters most, a phone suddenly powered off, an erased drive, an hour missing from security footage. In storytelling, absence of evidence can shout louder than its presence.

Every byte is a witness; the challenge is deciding which ones are telling the truth.

Turning Data into Drama

As a writer I often worry that using too much digital forensics bogs my story down, makes it uninteresting, or relies on telling instead of showing. After all, we want our characters in action. And watching someone stare at a screen or pick through files is very passive and very boring.

The secret to treating digital discovery is to use as little exposition as possible– sometimes you have to describe video footage or a computer file. Where we can get the most punch is when we use digital evidence as revelation… aka: a turning point in the plot. The found digital evidence can be a small, medium, or big turning point. But it has to count as something that shifts the plot investigation in a new direction.

●      Anchor the data to emotion. A recovered voicemail is about the message, but also the emotional meaning to the person who hears it.

●      Pace the reveal. Instead of unloading a list of findings, let information surface gradually, each clue raising new questions.

●      Show the cost. What does it feel like to invade a victim’s inbox or scroll through a dead child’s messages? Use sensory detail to humanize the act of investigation as the investigator is uncovering the evidence.

●      Avoid jargon overload. Let characters translate for the reader: “The timestamp’s off. Someone changed it.” That’s all you need. Unless your character is a digital analyst. Then, lean into the jargon as part of her character

The Emotional Edge

Behind every password and pixel is a person. And humans are driven by emotion. Use that in writing. Here’s how:
Bringing Humanity to the Data

The best crime stories are seeded in motive. Digital evidence should never replace emotion; it should reveal it.

●      A deleted text exposes regret.

●      A GPS trail shows obsession.

●      A search history lays bare guilt.

●      A detective scrolls through a suspect’s messages, what do they feel? Curiosity? Pity? Revulsion?

●      Think of each digital discovery as a confession waiting to be interpreted.

●      What is a detective’s reaction when she hacks into a victim’s private photos?

●      What happens when a journalist exposes data meant to stay sealed?

●      How do loved ones feel when a phone becomes evidence instead of memory?

Use emotional reactions of characters to heighten empathy, build the plot, and ratchet up suspense as they uncover a digital footprint.

Realism Without the Textbook

You don’t need to be a hacker to write digital authenticity. You just need to understand procedure and respect accuracy.

Start with credible sources

●      The U.S. Department of Justice’s Digital Evidence Guide outlines best practices for law enforcement.

●      The National Institute of Standards and Technology (NIST) publishes clear, publicly available frameworks.

●      The FBI Cyber Division offers summaries of current threats and tools.

●      Podcasts such as Darknet Diaries or The Forensic Lunch reveal real cases in accessible language.

Write lean

A single correct detail is worth more than pages of exposition. If you know what a “write-blocker” or “hash value” is, mention it once to show expertise, then move on. An easy hack for this is to have the digital expert character explain it to a non-techie character.

Consult real experts

A quick interview with a local cyber-crime investigator can provide nuances no textbook will, tone, pressure, emotional toll.

Authenticity doesn’t come from showing off what you know. It comes from knowing just enough to stay believable.

The Digital Detective

Every generation of investigators develops new instincts. The digital detective, whether real or fictional, reads data like body language.

They’re patient, analytical, and often brilliant. They see patterns others miss. But make sure yours is more than a brain behind a keyboard.

Give them the full range of character depth:

●      A cyber expert who still keeps notes by hand.

●      A genius coder who’s terrible at reading people.

●      A hacker turned consultant wrestling with guilt.

Common Mistakes to Avoid

1.     Tech magic. Don’t let characters “trace the IP in seconds” or “hack the Pentagon before lunch.” Real analysis takes time, warrants, and patience.

2.     One-click evidence. Data rarely tells a single truth. Circumstantial evidence here requires that investigators put all together all the evidence to create a line of reasoning that leads to a single suspect.

3.     Static scenes. Fiction can quickly turn into non-fiction with digital evidence trails. But no one wants to read computer analysis. BORING! Keep it quick, fast, and show how data changes the direction of plot.

4.     Outdated references. Technology evolves fast. Double-check that the apps, devices, and terminology in your story still exist.

5.     Emotionless experts. Readers connect to people, not software. Give your digital detectives personal reactions to what they discover.

The Forensic Thread

When I teach writing workshops, I remind authors that fictional forensics is about culling what is possible, not what isprobable. Whatever thread you pull on doesn’t have to be probable. It only has to be possible. Have fun with evidence and technology! Be inventive!

In my own fiction, I use cyber forensics the way I use autopsies, not for shock value, but to reveal truth. A recovered email can carry much emotional weight when it’s tied to character and motive.

Science gives us technology; humanity gives us connection. When you use cyber forensics, balance both.

The Future of Digital Crime

The frontier keeps expanding. Artificial intelligence can now detect manipulated images and generate false ones. Blockchain records are being introduced as tamper-proof evidence. Entire crime scenes can be reconstructed in virtual reality.

That evolution is thrilling for real life investigators… as much as it is for storytellers. Imagine writing a case where the killer uses deepfakes to create an alibi, or where investigators chase a suspect across multiple metaverses in VR.

But beneath the technology, the essential human question never changes: Why?

Technology will always change how crimes can be carried out… and solved. The corruption of human heart will always determine motive. And motive will always be the pulse of every great crime story.

Jennifer Dornbush is an author, screenwriter, and forensic specialist who brings crime stories to life with authenticity and heart. With a background rooted in real-world forensics and a passion for crafting unforgettable mysteries, Jennifer offers readers and viewers a front-row seat to the intersection of science, justice, and human nature. Jennifer’s crime expertise has made her a sought-after speaker, consultant, and educator. Through her webinars and master courses, Jennifer guides writers in melding suspenseful storytelling with forensic realism to the screen and page. Meet her at www.jenniferdornbush.com

Tales of an Author Event

Tales of an Author Event
Terry Odell

Display of Terry Odell's books

This past weekend, I had the opportunity to participate in a library’s annual “Mountain of Authors” event. I’ve been part of this event for quite a number of years, but this year, things were different. There was a new event organizer, which might have accounted for some of the changes, but I doubt she was working alone.

In the past, as in this year, the event includes two programs: a panel discussion and a keynote speaker with time in between to encourage library patrons to visit the authors’ tables. It takes place in the library’s meeting room and is open to the public at no charge. Tables for authors who’d been approved to participate were set up in the periphery of the room. My guesstimate, since I never actually counted the tables, was somewhere in the neighborhood of thirty author tables. They also used to include lunch for the authors, given the event ran from noon to five, not counting setup and breakdown time. This year, only water and a couple of packaged snacks.

Also this year, they decided to accommodate more authors. Authors were also permitted to bring their own tables, which increased the number of participants even more. Over eighty. And they spread them out through the entire upper level of the library, which is a huge space. A few authors were inside the program room, but most tables were set up outside the venue, including mine. My guess is traditionally published authors got priority for premium space, but that’s just a guess. Given that was one of the questions on the application form, I’m calling it an educated guess.

They tried to assign tables based on genres and my space was in the “Mystery Authors” section. That being the case, I decided to focus on my Mapleton series when deciding which books to bring. When I checked my inventory, I realized I had only the three newest Mapletons, so I added some stand alone romantic suspense books as well.

Events like this are a time investment. It’s an hour drive down the mountain for me. Then it’s unloading everything and setting up my table. The program was scheduled to start at noon, and I arrived at eleven to set up. My assigned section turned out to be in an area adjacent to … nothing. A couple of activity rooms, but nowhere near any books, which is what library patrons are most interested in. Thus, there was very little traffic to the tables in that section, and what traffic there was consisted primarily of the other 79 authors wanting to see who was there, say hi, get ideas for their own tables.

Many of us were repeat attendees, so it was nice to see familiar faces. It was nice to chat with the authors on nearby tables. The author to one side of me was there with his first book and were excited to go to events. They had a huge stand up banner with quotes of all the great reviews his book had gotten. His wife was the “talker-upper” and did the book pitching.

On the other side of me was a man who’d brought the most recent book in his series because it was the only one he’d indie published and the only one he could get copies of. His table was the first one on our side of the “aisle” and as people entered, he jumped up from behind his table and walked up to everyone coming in, and gave his sales pitch. I got the feeling that a lot of those people felt they were being encroached upon, so I stayed behind my table and, after they’d left him, invited them to partake of some of my swag to get a conversation started.

The types of people I encountered,no different from those I’ve encountered at every event I’ve ever been part of:

  • “If I make eye contact, I’ll have to buy something, so I’ll scan the table and walk by.”
  • “I like these books, but I didn’t bring any money today.”
  • “Do these come in ebook?”
  • “Can I get it in audio?”
  • “I need to check all the tables before I buy anything.” (After reading the back cover copy on every book I had on display).
  • And then there was the guy who wanted to read a sample, so he picked up the book and opened it to a random page about 1/4 of the way through. So much for hooking readers on page one!

On the bright side, nobody asked where the restrooms were.

My overall takeaways?

The setup was too large, and some areas were VERY low traffic.

People who come to libraries tend to borrow books, not buy them, which was no different this year. Attending these functions is more about meeting people, getting your name out there.

Chatting with people instead of staring at a computer screen is a healthy change of pace.

Did I sell any books? Yes. Two of my stand alone romantic suspense books, so if you’re all about the money, this was a loss. On the other hand, people did pick up my post it notes and business cards, so my name is in front of a lot more people.

The author and wife pair sold one. The get up and grab-’em guy swapped books with another author and I think he had one sale. What was interesting was one woman he’d approached had been an exchange student in the town in Italy where one of his books was set. He didn’t have that book with him, but she went to the nearest Barnes & Noble and bought it, then brought it back to the venue so he could sign it.

Would it have been better had my table been somewhere else? Maybe. Peeking into the program room showed mostly empty seats, so maybe the program wasn’t a draw to begin with. The other side of the library (where the books are) might have been a better location.

Would I do it again with the same setup? I don’t know, but I have a year to think about it.

What about you, TKZers? Any stories to share?


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Deadly Ambitions
Peace in Mapleton doesn’t last. Police Chief Gordon Hepler is already juggling a bitter ex-mayoral candidate who refuses to accept election results and a new council member determined to cut police department’s funding.
Meanwhile, Angie’s long-delayed diner remodel uncovers an old journal, sparking her curiosity about the girl who wrote it. But as she digs for answers, is she uncovering more than she bargained for?
Now, Gordon must untangle political maneuvering, personal grudges, and hidden agendas before danger closes in on the people he loves most.
Deadly Ambitions delivers small-town intrigue, political tension, and page-turning suspense rooted in both history and today’s ambitions.


Terry Odell is an award-winning author of Mystery and Romantic Suspense, although she prefers to think of them all as “Mysteries with Relationships.”

Motional Intelligence – New Tool to Build Characters

by Debbie Burke

Spell check thinks the word “motional” is a typo. But it isn’t.

Motional Intelligence: The Power of Movement in Leadership is the title of a new book by Dr. Scott Allison and Dr. George Goethals, professors emeriti at University of Richmond. Their premise is that humans register first impressions of others, not from physical appearance nor what they say, but from how they move.

They write: “Motion is core to social interaction. Before anyone speaks, a conversation has already begun…Speech came late. Motion came first.”  Motional intelligence sounded like a great potential tool for writers to build more interesting characters. So I reached out to Scott Allison to learn more.

Here’s our interview:

Debbie Burke: Thanks for agreeing to talk with me about Motional Intelligence. Would you please explain this concept to Kill Zone readers?

Scott Allison: Yes indeed. Here’s our definition of Motional Intelligence, which we abbreviate as MI. MI is the capacity to use one’s body movements intentionally to communicate and influence others, to accurately perceive, decode, and interpret the body movements of others across contexts, and to regulate one’s own movements – and one’s interpretations of others – in response to shifting social demands. So you can see there are 3 aspects of MI – an expressive component (how we display our own motions), an interpretive component (how we decode others’ motions), and a regulatory component (how we plan and adjust our motions to situational demands). We do these three things effortlessly and often without conscious awareness.

DB: What inspired you to write this book?

SA: One day, somewhere between burgers and coffee, my co-author George Goethals and I shared an epiphany: everything we were analyzing – heroism, leadership, empathy, influence, conflict – depended less on what people said and more on how they moved. Yet psychology had no comprehensive framework for this. This book began the moment we realized that these motions are not incidental to human life; they are human life. According to evolutionary biology, speech came late, and motion came first. George and I just had to write about this!

DB: You talk about familiar ways to measure intelligence like IQ (logical reasoning, problem-solving) and EI (emotional intelligence) but you say MI (motional intelligence) is different. Can you expand on that?

SA: Motional intelligence (MI) is one of many aspects of overall intelligence. MI is not the same as emotional intelligence (EI). EI centers on the perception, regulation, and expression of emotions, typically through facial cues, vocal tone, and affective appraisal. MI, by contrast, isolates a different communicative channel entirely: the dynamic language of body movement.

DB: Is “body language” the same as motional signals?

SA: Yes, in the sense that we use our bodies to communicate, to persuade, and to trigger emotional responses in others.

DB: What character/personality traits are revealed through MI?

SA: Pretty much every personality trait than humans possess can be revealed through motion. Kindness is revealed through a soft posture, a smile, a tilt of the head, and the reaching out of a hand. Dominance is revealed through very different posture, facial expression, and use of limbs. Before anyone speaks, a conversation has already begun. A stranger’s shoulders soften as you approach; a friend leans in before offering a word; a colleague’s foot angles toward the door long before they admit they’re late for another meeting. We live inside a constant choreography of meaning – signals given and received, often without our awareness.

DB: Do you have ideas how writers could use MI to bring fictional characters to life?

SA: Authors of fiction can use MI to animate characters in ways that transcend dialogue and emotional description. Rather than merely telling readers what a character feels, writers can reveal personality, motives, status, intentions, and inner conflict through patterns of movement—posture, gait, gesture, rhythm, pacing, stillness, spatial orientation, and bodily timing. A character with high MI, for example, may subtly mirror another person’s posture to build trust, regulate the emotional climate of a room through calm and deliberate movement, or communicate dominance through economy of motion rather than overt aggression. Conversely, low MI might appear in awkward timing, invasive spatial behavior, rigid posture, excessive fidgeting, or an inability to interpret others’ bodily signals accurately. Fiction writers can also use MI developmentally: a character’s evolving movement patterns may symbolize psychological transformation, growing confidence, moral corruption, intimacy, trauma, or heroic maturation. In this way, bodily motion becomes a narrative language that conveys character identity and relational dynamics at a pre-verbal level, making fictional people feel vividly alive and authentic.

DB: Writers are advised to show, don’t tell. Can you suggest how MI might be used to show relationships between characters? How about to show their conflicts?

SA: MI offers fiction writers a powerful “show, don’t tell” toolkit for revealing relationships and conflict through bodily movement rather than explicit explanation. Healthy relationships can be conveyed through movement synchrony—characters mirroring posture, walking in step, sharing relaxed rhythms, anticipating one another’s actions, or comfortably occupying shared space—thereby signaling trust, intimacy, affection, or familiarity. Romantic attraction may appear in subtle orientation cues, lingering gestures, or softened movement, while friendship may emerge through playful physical ease and unguarded posture. Conflict, though, often disrupts bodily coordination through avoidance, rigid posture, pacing, competing movement rhythms, territorial spacing, or emotional stillness. Writers can also show relational transformation over time by altering these movement patterns, allowing bodily synchrony, distance, hesitation, or tension to function as a nonverbal narrative language that makes fictional relationships feel psychologically authentic and vividly alive.

DB: I can imagine ways that misreads of a character’s MI could lead to misinterpretations and plot complications. You’re also a film expert and co-author of the book Reel Heroes and Villains. Can you give movie examples where MI (or lack thereof) was instrumental in driving the plot?

SA: Absolutely. MI is often central to cinematic storytelling because film is an inherently movement-based medium. In The Dark Knight, Heath Ledger’s Joker possesses a dark form of MI. He constantly manipulates spatial dynamics, bodily unpredictability, and movement rhythm to destabilize others psychologically. His erratic gestures, invasive proximity, asymmetrical posture, and sudden stillness generate tension and fear, driving much of the film’s emotional chaos. In The Devil Wears Prada, Meryl Streep’s Miranda Priestly uses highly regulated MI to project authority. Her economy of motion, precise pacing, controlled stillness, and minimal gestures create an aura of dominance that shapes every interaction around her. In Napoleon Dynamite, Napolean’s social awkwardness emerges through stiff posture, delayed reactions, unusual gait, and poor synchrony with peers, creating both comedy and emotional isolation.

DB: Where can readers find your new book?

SA: Our MI book is available on Amazon or Barnes and Noble. There is a kindle version, too.

DB: Thank you, Scott, for exploring this interesting topic.

SA: My pleasure and thank you for showing an interest!

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TKZers: Can you think of film characters who use MI especially effectively? Do you see ways MI might help your work in progress?

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Dr. Scott Allison and Dr. George Goethals graciously gave me major assistance with the psychology of villains for The Villain’s Journey: How to Create Villains Readers Love to Hate

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