
“Brevity is the soul of wit.” —William Shakespeare
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We’re all familiar with Shakespeare’s take on the subject of brevity. But in the 21st century, brevity may be the soul of more than wit as attention spans contract and readers look for instant gratification in their reading material.
An article on wordsrated.com states what we all suspected:
The digital age brought a huge increase of various types of content fighting for people’s time and attention. People have more options than ever on how to spend their time. This variety of things to do alone is one of the reasons why reading time is in decline over the years.
With these factors in mind, our hypothesis was that readers are choosing to buy shorter books as the years go by. Results of our analysis suggest that this is the case, as best-selling books got 11.8% shorter over the last decade.
So, if readers are looking for shorter fiction, why not try writing short stories? There’s a post on Jane Friedman’s site entitled 20 Reasons Why Everybody Should Write Short Stories by Elizabeth Sims that addresses that very question.
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If a novel is a marathon and a novella is a half-marathon, I’d define a short story as a 400-meter race. Even though it’s only once around the track, the runner can’t run at full speed because he/she will slow down dramatically in the home stretch. The race requires a strategy and a punchy ending just like a short story.
And just how short is a short story? It can be anywhere from 1K to 10K words, depending on who you ask. Some say they can even be longer. But whatever the length, the story has to impact the reader in a forceful way.
TKZ’s own James Scott Bell wrote a book entitled How to Write Short Stories and Use Them to Further Your Writing Career. In his book, Jim identifies the one thing a short story must do: “The most important part is emotional impact.”
To that end, here are a few of my favorite short stories that pack an emotional punch:
The Gift of the Magi by O. Henry – This story is probably on most people’s lists of favorites. With a theme of selfless sacrifice that defines true love, the story ends with both a surprising and satisfying twist for the reader.
The Shepherd by Frederick Forsyth – This Christmas story keeps the reader engaged by following the lonely flight of a fighter pilot as modern technology fails and he finds help in a very untechnical form. The surprise ending delivers an emotional jolt the reader won’t forget.
The Apple Tree by John Galsworthy – This is perhaps my favorite, although it comes in at around 17K words which is approaching novella territory. Still, it tells the poignant tale of young love and, sadly, betrayal.
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Here are some short stories I’ve written:
Lady Pilot-in-Command, the Short Story – A young pilot decides on the airway less taken and does the right thing, even though it’s dangerous.
The Clutter Busters – A woman begins to clean her attic, but with the help of some uninvited guests, finds the real clutter is in her own mind.
The Money Tree – A prideful woman learns humility and finds a new purpose in life when the easy money disappears.
Willow Tree Farm – This story is based on the Biblical proverb “If your enemy is hungry, give him food to eat; if he is thirsty, give him water to drink. In doing this, you will heap burning coals on his head, and the Lord will reward you.” —Proverbs 25:21-22
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So TKZers: What are your favorite short stories? Have you written any? Tell us about them.
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Cassie Deakin is a talented and experienced private pilot who loves being in the air. But when she agrees to fly a handsome stranger to a meeting in the Nevada desert, she lands in the middle of a drug bust gone wrong, and she’s the only one who can save the day.
Should she fly away from danger? Or listen to the memory of her father’s words to “Never stand idly by when you see another pilot in trouble.”
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Mesopotamia, 3500 BC – Clay Tablets
Egypt, 3000 BC – Papyrus
Greece, 500 BC – Goat skins

Movable type – 1000 – 1400
Gutenberg’s printing press – 1439
Pocketbooks – 1500
Printing comes to America – 1640
Project Gutenberg – 1970s
Amazon Kindle – 2007







Riders of the Purple Sage by Zane Grey
Satan’s Subway by Steve Hooley
Theo of Golden by Allen Levi







