First Page Critique – Samaritan Sins

By Debbie Burke  @burke_writer   Let’s welcome another Brave Author who submitted a first page for review. Enjoy reading it then we’ll discuss. ~~~  “Waller, they found a body on the Midwest Bike Trail about two hundred feet east of … Continue reading

First Page Critique: My Girl is a Dog

Another brave writer submitted their first page for critique. See ya on the flip-side. Title: My Girl is a Dog Genre: Mystery/Thriller  CHAPTER ONE A Sunday morning on a snow-covered mountain trail, as I walked and dwelled on past sins … Continue reading