First Page Critique: City of Caves

My apologies to the brave writer who submitted this first page for critique. I meant to do it sooner, but I’ve had an insanely busy October. The writer says the genre is paranormal/horror. My comments will follow.   City of … Continue reading

First Page Critique: Side Effects

Another brave writer submitted their first page for critique. Enjoy! I’ll catch ya on the flip side. Title: Side Effects Genre: Psychological Thriller All he could hear was the thunder of rushing blood, only distantly aware of the sharp, bright … Continue reading