First Page Critique: Can You Find the Murder Weapon?

By Sue Coletta Another brave writer submitted their first page for critique. My comments will follow. The Invisible  Bette always joked Marge’s baking would be their demise—but not like this. The Schuster sisters came out to their garden this morning … Continue reading

My Brief Life and Tragic Death – First Page Critique  

 By Debbie Burke @burke_writer   Please welcome another Brave Author who’s submitted a first page for a story entitled: My Brief Life and Tragic Death Chapter 1. Purple Pumpkins I met Frank and survived an assassination attempt between lunch and … Continue reading

When Verbs Go Rogue: First Page Critique

Another brave writer submitted their first page for critique. My comments will follow. Monstruo Cubano Once inside La Libreria de Juan Carlos, Brook Harper squeaked in horror. She gaped at the rows of mildewed shelves lined not with books, but … Continue reading