First Page Critique: How To Improve a Compelling Opener

Another brave writer submitted their first page for critique. My comments/suggestions will follow. Enjoy! Expendable Prologue  Kate turned right onto her parent’s street only to find a street jammed with police cars. A cacophony of lights, flashing red and blue, … Continue reading

First Page Critique: Scattershot

Another brave writer submitted their first page for critique. Catch ya on the flip-side. Scattershot It wasn’t supposed to be this way.  We had it planned, Tom and I. We said goodbye to friends – hoping retirement would be an … Continue reading