Every choice comes with a consequence. —Roy T. Bennett
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Human history is strewn with the results of bad decisions.
- Someone decided to fill the Hindenburg airship with hydrogen rather than helium. Thirty-six people died.
- The captain of the Titanic decided to maintain speed through the icy waters of the North Atlantic even though icebergs had been reported in the area. More than fifteen hundred people died.
- Napoleon decided to invade Russia and lost most of his army. Nearly a million people died.
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Sometimes a disaster isn’t the result of just one bad decision, but many small ones.
Take the story of the Titan missile disaster, for example. (Most of the facts cited here were taken from the This American Life podcast, Episode 634. A transcript can be found here.)
As most of us know, there are missile silos located all over the United States. They house intercontinental ballistic missiles that are armed with nuclear warheads intended to keep us safe by preventing bad actors from trying to attack the U.S.
Missile sites are placed deep underground with heavily insulated control centers nearby, and lots and lots of concrete and steel between the silo and the outside world.
Now you might think ICBMs just sit in their silos waiting for something to happen. But actually, the missiles have to be maintained just like any other manmade artifact. You would think that such a high-stakes situation would be so closely monitored that nothing could go wrong.
You would think.
In September 1980, the Titan II missile in Damascus, Arkansas was scheduled for maintenance. The Titan II, at that time the most powerful weapon in the American nuclear arsenal, was loaded with two different liquid fuels in separate compartments rather than the solid fuel used in later missiles. If the highly volatile, toxic liquid fuels escaped or met unexpectedly, there could be a disaster.
Two young men were assigned the maintenance task. The first one, we’ll call him Primary Worker, was experienced. The second, let’s call him Trainee, was in training.
The task was straightforward. One of the missile’s fuel tanks was low on pressure, so all they had to do was take off a cap and add some fuel. Sort of like pumping gas into your car. Primary Worker was familiar with the procedure. No problem.
In order for the work to begin, however, the hydraulic platform, which was like an elevator that went up and down the side of the missile, had to be lowered. But there was a problem with the platform, and the maintenance guys had to wait for a couple of hours while workers fixed it.
At this point, it was late Friday afternoon, heading into evening. You can just imagine two young men who are eager to meet friends and start the weekend being told there was a delay. It must have been frustrating. We all know what it’s like when we have something planned, but somebody throws a wrench into the works. (This will be extremely meaningful later.)
Finally, the hydraulic platform was repaired. The two young men donned their protective suits and started down the long tunnel to the silo. At some point, they realized they had forgotten the torque wrench that was required for the job.
Rather than causing a further delay by getting out of his suit, following all the protocol of going back to his truck to retrieve the torque wrench, and then redoing everything, Primary Worker made Bad Decision #1: ignore the regulation and use a huge, two-piece ratchet wrench which he had with him. Trainee questioned the decision, but Primary Worker said he’d done it before, and it was not a problem.
The two men proceeded to the silo and took the hydraulic platform up. When it stopped, they were roughly eighty feet above the base of the missile.
The platform had a rubber bumper that was supposed to be flush against the side of the missile to prevent anything from dropping, but the equipment was old, and there was a gap between the platform and the missile.
The two men used the ratchet wrench to remove the cap from the missile. Everything went smoothly.
Bad decision #2: One of the men handed his part of the wrench to the other one. The other man dropped it.
Are you getting worried yet?
The socket fell between the platform and the side of the missile. Of course, it gained momentum as it plummeted eighty feet. My husband calculated it was probably going about fifty mph when it hit the thrust ring that the missile sat atop, bounced, and—you guessed it—punctured a hole in the side of the missile. Fuel began to spray out. What are the chances?
At this point, the maintenance men should have radioed the control center and told them about the accident. They didn’t.
Bad decision #3: Instead of contacting the control center and owning up to what had happened, Primary Worker simply called in and said there was a cloud of vapor coming out of the side of the rocket. The maintenance men were ordered back to the control center.
Alarms began to sound in the control center. Horns were going off, lights were flashing, and people there were rushing around trying to understand the problem, but it didn’t make sense because they didn’t have the whole picture.
When the maintenance men got back to the control center, they saw the chaos that was in progress, but they made Bad decision #4: they still didn’t let the authorities know that the side of the missile had been punctured. Since the fuel compartments were pressurized, at some point enough fuel would leak out, the bottom compartment would collapse, and there would probably be an explosion. But the people in the control center didn’t know how to treat the problem because they didn’t know what the problem was.
Finally, one of the controllers suspected the maintenance men were holding something back, so he approached them and insisted that they say exactly what had happened. They finally came clean.
When the truth became clear, the people in the control center realized an explosion was imminent. They contacted their superiors.
The question was whether to remain in the control center which was designed to withstand a nuclear hit, or to evacuate.
Bad decision #5: The commanding officer ordered them to evacuate.
When the explosion came, there were men outside in the fields and woods around the complex. Huge chunks of metal and concrete debris, some as large as a school bus, rained down. The lid of the silo, a 1.5-million pound slab of concrete and steel, was hurled over 500 feet.
The nuclear warhead ejected from the missile and landed in a ditch a quarter mile away from the silo. It didn’t detonate. If it had … well, let’s not think about that.
So there you have it. A perfect storm of bad decisions. At each stage, the stakes were raised that led to a disaster. It could have been worse.
Incidentally, the accident prompted a change in regulations. Workers now have to attach their tools to themselves by a lanyard. Good decision.
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Although we try to avoid making bad decisions in real life, they can be the stuff of great fiction. After all, bad decisions are usually born out of base human fallacies: fear, hubris, anger, greed, envy, lust, impatience, frustration… The list goes on. And these make wonderful fodder for storytelling. As each bad choice is made in a story, it ratchets (pun intended) up the tension. Each new decision raises the stakes and ensures the reader will turn the page.
Think of some of the great fictional examples of bad choices.
- The Trojans decided to accept the gift of a wooden horse from the Greeks.
- The mayor of Amity Island in the movie Jaws decided to keep the beaches open even though there had been a shark sighted in the area.
- Scientists decided to use DNA extracted from fossilized mosquitoes to create dinosaurs in Jurassic Park.
It just goes to show you:
Bad choices make good stories. —Rajkumar Hirani
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So TKZers: Can you think of any examples of bad decision-making from books you’ve read? How about characters in your own books. Have they made bad choices?
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“Good decisions come from experience. Experience comes from bad decisions.”
The villain in my mainstream trilogy thinks she can simply replace one less-than-satisfactory partner with a more-likely-to-succeed version – who seems to like her well enough but to also respect that she’s not available.
She hits on the perfect scheme to persuade him she is, and they will be powerful together.
It might have worked, but the replacement is capable of detecting that something’s not right. And he made a few bad decisions himself, for which he will now pay a hugely inflated price.
And finally make the right decisions?
Good morning, Alicia.
I love the plot line in your trilogy. Each bad decision results in a higher price to pay. And sometimes the character just doubles down and makes another bad choice.
Sounds like a great story.
I’m just getting started – with the final book in the trilogy getting a whole lot of drama before it settles down, and even then?
I love knowing exactly how a story gets where it’s going – and then making that both utterly predictable in hindsight, and invisible when first reading.
In a trilogy with a single set of characters, that means each book has to aim higher – which is also so much scary fun for the writer.
“Good decisions come from experience. Experience comes from bad decisions.”
I. Love. This.
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Not original, I’m afraid – but I didn’t stop to look up a proper reference late last night. I made the good decision to go to bed.
It’s one of those aphorisms that feels as if the rough points have been sanded off until it’s the pithiest way to say the cliche.
And because we humans are so fallible, we will never run out of story fodder. And that’s a nice plus for story-writing–a way to help us (and others) learn from mistakes.
Morning, Brenda.
Great observation. It’s wise to learn from the mistakes of others.
In some of my books, the villain doesn’t start out to become a murderer. Instead, they kill to keep a bad decision from becoming public. And then they have to cover that up. Your post gave me something to chew on.
Great example, Patricia. Once that first bad choice is made, everything builds on it.
(Btw, I like your new photo.)
Mine are from real life.
Tokaimura nuclear power plant accident – 1999. There is a special bucket for handling cooling water at a nuclear power plant. A worker used the custodian’s mop bucket instead. Two dead.
American Airlines Flight 191 loses an engine on takeoff. Engine separated from aircraft at 4600′. 271 Killed. Traced back to a maintenance worker using a standard platform lift rather than the specific lift for removing engines. Some of the bolts were bent causing the engine to break free in flight.
A part of my flight training was, “Federal Air Regulations (FARs) are written on tombstones. Your job it to follow, not write FARs.”
On a test flight on 10/10/2000 The pilot in command of a test flight of a Challenger 604 climbed out on take off at too high an angle. The plane crashed killing the three people on board. There is now a regulation about that.
Thanks for these examples, Alan. You would think maintenance workers on life-and-death equipment would be more careful.
I remember reading about the AA flight where the engine actually separated from the aircraft. What a terrifying thought.
Stay safe out there.
Nevil Shute’s On The Beach is that kind of an FAR.
Great post, Kay! Riveting read, too—I didn’t know all these details about this disaster. I feel doubly fortunate we’ve avoided other nuclear disasters. As have others.
During the Cuban Missile Crisis the U.S. navy began dropping depth charges. The Soviet submarine B-59 was in the area. The boat’s captain and political officer believed war had broken out and wanted fire a nuclear tipped torpedo at the U.S. fleet, which very possibly could have led to nuclear escalation and global thermonuclear war. A very bad decision. Fortunately, the submarine’s executive officer, Vasily Arkhipov, refused to go along with this action. A very good decision by a dedicated officer which quite possibly saved the world.
On a much lighter note, the murderers in my own cozy mysteries become so by a chain of bad decisions and allowing bad emotions to fester on top of already bad decisions which led to the ultimate bad decision—murder.
Hope you have a great week, filled with words.
Good morning, Dale. Yeah, bad decisions on a nuclear level are hard to even think about.
It’s interesting that you mention that episode during the Cuban Missile Crisis. My husband was a brand new Navy ensign aboard the USS Beale at the time. That was the ship that dropped depth charges (actually, they may have been something less dangerous) to force the Soviet sub to the surface. We only found out about how close the world had come to nuclear war when some classified info was released recently. Wow. Frank was in the crosshairs of a nuclear torpedo, and we never knew.
I thank God for that Soviet officer who saved my future husband’s life—and probably millions of others. A good decision.
He was a true hero:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vasily_Arkhipov
Wow, to think your husband was aboard the USS Beale during that episode! You’re right about the depth charges—they were “signaling” ones, according to the above wikipedia entry.
So glad Frank and everyone else aboard the Beale was unharmed.
Excellent story, Kay. And great advice. My characters often make bad decisions, choices that seemed logical at the time. What I don’t like in novels is when the bad decisions are obvious, like a teenager in a horror flick who goes into a dark basement alone for no apparent reason or hides behind a wall of chainsaws.
Morning, Sue.
I agree. The dumb decisions are scary, but the bad decisions that seem like a good idea at the time are more interesting.
Here’s to a future where all our bad decisions are only in the stories we write.
I did something a bit different in one of my novels. The heroine was an impossible situation through most of the novel, and at each juncture, she had a choice between her own happiness and safety versus the right/moral thing to do, and she chose the right thing to do every single time. I’ve always considered her the strongest character I’ve ever written.
Good morning, Marilynn.
It’s inspiring to read characters who always choose the right way, even to their own detriment. A heroine indeed!
Riveting reading here this morning, Kay!
If I were to put all of my bad decisions into a novel, it’d take a speed reader 1,000 years to finish it.
Jes’ sayin’…
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I’m with you, Deb. We all make bad decisions in life. Maybe that’s why we can empathize with characters to take that option.
One of the best thrillers I ever read is A Simple Plan by Scott Smith. It’s about one bad decision, leading to a series of more bad decisions…you’re reading it and constantly saying, “Please don’t do it” and then they do it. Riveting!
That’s the best kind of story. I didn’t read the book, but I saw the movie. Reminds me of that old saying “When you realize you’re in a hole, stop digging.” They just didn’t stop.
I loved your Napoleon example. Did you know that some historians believe the tin buttons on the army’s uniforms contributed to Napoleon’s downfall? “Tin pest”, a change in the molecular structure of the tin buttons due to the searing cold, caused the tin to disintegrate and his soldiers couldn’t keep their coats closed.
I did not know that about the tin buttons. Fascinating.
Have you seen the map that illustrates the size of Napoleon’s army by the width of the line as it marches to Russia and returns? Very effective.
https://www.esri.com/content/dam/esrisites/en-us/esri-press/book-pages/sample-page/mapping-time-illustrated-minards-map-napoleons-russian-campaign-1812.pdf
Kay, your post and the comments are hair-raising stories. Wow.
Joseph Campbell studied stories through history and different cultures. He concluded stories are a roadmap for life. Good choices lead to survival and bad choices lead to disaster.
In my books, bad guys make choices with malicious intent to harm others. But often characters who are not villains make bad choices out of inexperience, immaturity, and impatience. Often those consequences can be as damaging as malicious choices.
Bad choices mean a never-ending supply of story ideas.
Hi Debbie,
Lucky us! There are enough bad choices that we’ll never run out of story material.