by Debbie Burke

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As a kid, I played the Clue board game, but otherwise I don’t know much about gaming. When mystery dinner parties recently crossed my radar, I became curious. A game night with drinks, dinner, and a crime to solve sounded intriguing. As a writer, I wondered:
Who writes the scripts?
Where do you find them?
How do mystery dinners work?
Is script writing a worthwhile option for authors to try?
To answer these questions, I snooped around a Florida snowbird community where a mystery dinner party had been held a couple of weeks ago.
The party hosts are Suzanne and Michael Fitzsimmons, originally from Colorado where they planned social events at a club they owned. After snow-birding for several years, they moved to Florida permanently and host frequent mystery dinners with varied themes. Suzanne says, “It’s a good way for casual acquaintances to become friends and bring the community closer together.”
Before sending invitations, Suzanne talks with residents to match personalities with roles.
That led to my interviews with four party guests.
Judie and Dru Gilliland are retired farmers from Ohio. Judie describes herself as being on the shy side although she’s not shy about her alma mater Ohio State (“Go Buckeyes!”). Their daughter describes Dru’s personality: “Dad could be in the middle of China and he’d find someone he knew.”
Kristen and Joe MacLellan live on Prince Edward Island, Canada and spend winters in Florida. Before retirement, Kristen owned a day care and Joe was a bank manager. Initially Kristen was reluctant to accept the party invitation because of shyness but said, “Joe was all over it like a dirty shirt.” Their nine grandkids call him the “Silly Grandad.”
Parties are built around themes and holidays like a Halloween haunted house, Scrooge’s Christmas murder, a cruise ship, and even a Hillbilly Wedding. Suzanne buys mystery game sets that include scripts, character roles, and descriptions.
She caps the guest list at eight to 10 people. Then she sends invitations that assign each person to play a character and suggests costumes. According to Judie, thrift shops are excellent places to shop for those outfits.
The setting for this party is a Napa Valley vineyard during a wine festival. Five years before, the vineyard’s owner Barry Underwood disappeared and the body had been buried under the wood floor in the wine cellar (humorous names are mandatory). When an earthquake destroys the floor, the body is revealed, and party guests must solve the crime.
Suspects include:
Ralph Rottingrape, the victim’s cousin who took over running the vineyard after Underwood’s disappearance.
Otto Von Schapps, played by Dru. He’s a loud, boisterous German wine merchant who wears lederhosen and suspenders and flashes lots of cash. “Perfect part for him,” Judie says. “Except I don’t flash cash,” Dru adds.

Kristen MacLellan as Marilyn Merlot
Kristen plays Marilyn Merlot whose costume is a billowy white dress, platinum wig, and long gloves. In this photo, Kristen’s shyness is forgotten as she recreates the famous scene from Seven Year Itch. “Too bad the fan wasn’t up to the task,” she laments.
Two characters are assigned to play the sleuths:
Joe is Bud Wizer, an FBI agent with beer logos on his t-shirt and cap. He’s armed with a six-pack.

Bud Wizer and Marilyn Merlot
Judie is Bonnie Lass, a Scottish mystery author, making her ideally suited to solve crimes. She wears a tartan skirt, knee socks, and a narrow brim fedora.
During cocktail hour, host Michael bartends while Suzanne hands out booklets for guests to read that outline the plot.
Over salad, characters introduce themselves and read their part of the script. Each receives an envelope containing a clue that’s unique to that character. All have motives for murder, but only the killer knows his or her identity and that person reads from a different script.
While dinner goes on in a light-hearted atmosphere, characters warm to their roles with accents, flamboyant gestures, and ad libs. Joe improvised by adding a blackmail subplot that wasn’t in the script.
After dessert, everyone tries to guess the killer’s identity. At this party, only Dru and Judie guessed correctly. The identity was revealed to me but, sorry, I’m sworn to secrecy.
The evening is hailed as an entertaining success and Suzanne and Michael are on to planning the next party in March with a different theme and a new guest list.
Researching more game details, I found party kits range from $25 to $200+, depending on complexity and sophistication. Basic sets usually include invitation forms, name tags, scripts, and menu suggestions to fit the theme. Higher-end sets offer those options plus decorations, props, costumes, party souvenirs, and prizes.
Kits are tailored to different age groups from young children to teens to adults. Selections are mostly G-rated, without onstage violence.
Scripts can be similar to the Clue board game where victim, weapon, and murderer vary each time. Others feature set scripts that are not changeable.
If a murder dinner party is for profit where admission is charged or tickets are sold, a commercial license must be purchased (usually $200-250).
Variations offer options where all guests, even the host, can be suspects. For those, each person is assigned a number beforehand. At the beginning of the party, guests draw slips with corresponding numbers from a bowl. People are instructed to keep a straight face when they open slips. Most say “innocent” but one says “guilty.” Only the “guilty” player knows who they are.
Two scripts are provided to players—one to be followed if they’re innocent, a different one if they’re guilty.
Can you earn income by writing mystery party scripts? I found one site that accepts submissions but doesn’t mention compensation. Mastersofmystery.com‘s application outlines qualifications:
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Exceptional storytelling skills with a passion for creating captivating narratives.
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Strong writing and editing abilities, with a keen eye for detail.
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Creativity and the ability to think critically to construct intricate murder mystery plots.
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Excellent communication and collaboration skills to work effectively within a multidisciplinary team.
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Previous experience in game writing, scriptwriting, or a related field is a plus.
I also found one successful business built around mystery party games. Dr. Bon Blossman is a physiologist with a passion for gaming, party planning, and writing. She combined all three into Mymysteryparty.com.
Blossman recalls:
“When I launched My Mystery Party in 2006, I handled everything—from game development and web design to customer service and shipping.”
The enterprise grew quickly. By 2009, Blossman was teaching as a post-doc and adjunct professor when realization hit her:
“My games and mystery novels had surpassed my academic income, leading me to become a full-time mystery party game developer and YA author.”
Her website showcases more than 100 games she’s written, with titles like the “Nancy Crew Mystery Series,” “Game of Crowns,” and “Twas the Night Before Murder.” The site includes videos, how-to articles, and an extensive storefront with related merchandise.
After almost 20 years in business, Blossman remains committed and hands-on:
“While I now have an amazing team assisting with party packs, phones, social media, and customer inquiries, I still develop every game and co-manage the websites, among other things.”
Her creativity, entrepreneurship, and hard work paid off.
“They say to turn your hobby into a career—and that’s exactly what I did!”
Encouraging words for all of us struggling authors.
During my interview with Suzanne, she mentioned, “I’d like to host an all-girl party,” for women who want to play the game, but their husbands resist.
That prompted an idea. Could I write the mystery dinner party script she wants? I’m always game (sorry) for a new challenge. Hmmm.
What if a guy who’d been married eight times is murdered and the ex-wives are all suspects…?
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TKZers: Have you ever attended a mystery dinner party? Have you hosted one? To stretch writing muscles, would you try creating a script?
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Interesting, Debbie. There’s a restaurant not TOO far away (everything’s far away up here) that has done mystery dinners, but I’ve never gone. The closest I came was at a writer’s conference where the “detectives” had to figure out the murderer, and the suspects were all seated around the room, and there was a limited amount of time at each station. I’d volunteered to be one of the suspects, and had the facts I was allowed to divulge provided. It was fun.
Terry, a mystery game at a writer’s conference sounds fun. Were you innocent or guilty? 😉
Innocent, of course.
Likely story.
We had a wonderful time at our first murder mystery dinner. Suzanne & Michael were wonderful hosts guiding us through the evening. The characters were very interesting & enabled us all to “let our hair down” & get into our roles. It was a good opportunity for those of us who might be a little shy at first to explore what we can do with a character. More people should try this experience , they might find they have as much fun as we did.
Kristen, thanks for being such good sources for this story. Talking with you was almost like being there.
Fun times, Debbie! I’ve never attended or hosted a mystery game party. However, back in the early 1990s I did participate in two Murder at the Library programs, as a suspect, while the kids quizzed us and looked for clues. Both times were a lot of fun—solving a mystery proved a huge hit with the kids.
I’ve thought about creating a cozy mystery board game—I used to belong to a play test group for new board games at the local game store. I’d never thought of writing a script for a murder dinner party but would give it a try if the opportunity presented itself.
Dale, Murder at the Library sounds like a hoot, esp. with kids. Did they force you to confess? 😉
I was amazed at the variety of mystery games online. You should give a board game a try. Anything that stretches different creative muscles is helpful.
My earlier reply was describing what a wonderful time we had at this murder mystery dinner, definitely something that others should consider trying as it was a fun evening.
Debbie is a talented novelist. Her books are intense with lots of drama & very interesting characters. Her review of our murder mystery dinner was very well done. Getting to know a few of the characters gave the background needed to peak the interest of others of others to want to try attending such an event sometime. Debbie would be a good person to write mystery dinner scripts.
Aww, Kristen, you’re so kind. [blushing} Thanks!!!
What a fun idea, Debbie. We attended a mystery dinner once, but it was aa different format. There must have been fifty or so people in the audience, and the mystery was played out by actors. I like your method better.
Hi Kay, while researching this story, I ran across the “performance” game format. Acting troupes put on dinner theatre plays, often co-oping with a restaurant, to earn money.
But I agree, being part of the play sounds more fun.
Fun stuff, Debbie!
When I was a teen, I belonged to a church youth group. We had “mystery” parties occasionally and I thought they were quite fun.
I’ve never attended one as an adult, though. It sounds like it’d be a fun evening.
Have a great day…
Glad you enjoyed this, Deb. Maybe “Grandma” could host a party for the grandkiddies?
I’ve always wanted to go to a mystery dinner…and I’d do one myself, but then I’d have to cook…
Hahahaha, Pat!
How about this idea? The killer’s punishment is to wash the dishes.
Thanks for the write up. I do enjoy sharing these fun evenings with friends. I enjoy seeing how well I matched the character to my friends. The evenings events get better as guests get into character and start adding their own lines and personality. If you write a ladies night out mystery dinner , I would enjoy hosting. 😉
Suzanne, you and Michael are gracious hosts who make guests comfortable enough to let their hair down.
Got an idea cooking for a script 😉
Great overview, Debbie. The character names are hilarious! I considered writing a script for my newsletter subscribers to play and found an excellent YouTube series that goes into the nuts and bolts of creating a mystery game. I have it bookmarked somewhere. If I can dig it out (it’s been a couple years), I’ll email you the link.
Sue, a game sounds like great fun for your subscribers. If you can find the link easily that would be cool. If not, don’t worry. I can probably track it down on YouTube.