How to Spot and Plug Plot Holes

Caution! Plot holes!

Nothing yanks me out of a story faster than a plot hole. If they’re really stupid, I get mad. And I quit reading or watching. That disconnect doesn’t just “break immersion”, it breaks trust, and it quietly murders your relationship with your reader/viewer.

Plot holes can happen anywhere, but they’re most common in mysteries, thrillers, and action stories, where the engine of the story is cause-and-effect.

At their core, plot holes are logic problems with motives, chronology, and missions.

Motives for Heroes

When readers say, “I don’t buy it,” they’re usually talking about motive.

  • Does what your hero wants make sense?
  • Do your hero’s actions make sense and connect with his motive?

Extra Plot-Hole Patrol Tip: Make sure the hero’s motive isn’t just logical, but urgent. If the hero can shrug and go get tacos, your plot is in trouble. Stakes are the duct tape that keeps decisions from wobbling.

Motives for Villains

Villains are plot-hole factories when their plans are vague, inconsistent, or powered by “because the writer needed it.”

  • Do we understand why he’s doing what he’s doing?
  • Do we understand what the bad guy’s plan is?

Extra Tip: “I’m evil” is not a plan. Even chaotic villains have an internal logic: a need, a wound, a belief, a fear, or a payoff. If the villain’s motive changes scene to scene, the audience notices.

Chronology

Chronology is where stories accidentally teleport.

Make sure that your characters are doing the things they need to do in the right order. Don’t have them break into the Art Museum before they’ve learned how to disarm the alarm system.

Extra Tip: Time is sneaky. If your story has travel, deadlines, injuries, weather, or “we only have six hours,” do a quick sanity check: How long would this actually take? If your character drives across town in three minutes during rush hour, you will lose your readers.

Missions

This is the “what are we doing and how are we doing it?” category. Mission confusion creates plot holes because the audience can’t track what should logically happen next.

  • Is your good guys’ plan clear?
  • What are they going after?
  • How are they going to do it?
  • And what do they need to do it?
  • How are the bad guys going to counter the hero’s actions?
  • Does the villain have a logical reaction to the hero’s successes?
  • Does the hero have a logical reaction to the villain’s roadblocks?

Extra Tip: Track resources like a hawk. Weapons, money, passwords, keys, vehicles, evidence, magic rules, phone battery, injury level, allies who know the plan. A shocking number of plot holes are really just “Wait…where did that come from?” problems.

Here are Three Ways to Avoid Logic Breaks

1. The Villain’s Timeline

From The Villain’s Journey by Debbie Burke, even when he is off camera, track what the villain is doing in every scene to stymie the hero.

2. The Villain’s Plan

Create a step-by-step plan for the villain’s goal. Each step should happen in your story, even if some of them are off camera.

Picture the villain with their own off-screen Netflix series running parallel to your story. What scenes are happening that we don’t see? Who are they calling, bribing, stalking, moving, framing, sabotaging?

A helpful test: if you can’t summarize the villain’s plan in 3 to 7 steps, it’s probably not clear enough in your head yet, which means it definitely won’t be clear on the page.

3. The Hero’s Knowledge and Logic Check

Go through each scene and ask: what does the hero know here about what the villain is doing? Based on what he knows, what is his next logical step?

Extra Idea: Do this for the reader, too. What does the reader know at this moment? What are you inviting them to assume? A lot of plot holes are really “the author forgot what they told the audience” holes.

A Few More Plot Hole Plugs

The “Because/Therefore” Chain

For every major beat: this happens because of that, and therefore this next thing happens. If you find yourself writing “and then,” pause. “And then” is where plot holes breed like rabbits.

The Reverse Outline

After you draft, create a scene-by-scene outline of what actually happens. You’ll instantly spot missing steps, logic leaps, and scenes that depend on information nobody has yet.

The Continuity Bible

Especially for series, thrillers, and anything with big conspiracies: keep a simple master doc for names, dates, rules, injuries, secrets, locations, and “who knows what when.”

Eyes on the Story

And finally, the best defense against plot holes and logic problems is another pair of eyes. Have trusted writer friends, story coaches, and editors read your book or script and give you feedback. Ask your readers to track your plot and make sure it makes sense.

Because here’s the truth: you can’t always see your own plot holes. You built the whole world. You know what you meant. Your reader only knows what’s on the page, and they will notice when your story skips a beat.

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11 thoughts on “How to Spot and Plug Plot Holes

  1. “you can’t always see your own plot holes.” So true. That’s why I always pay attention to my beta readers. I decide whether to take their advice, but I always consider their opinions.

    • So smart, Mike! Having the discernment about which feedback to take and which to disregard is so important as a writer.

  2. Lindsey, thanks for this great checklist to find and patch plot holes! Critique buddies and beta readers are the best defense. Fresh eyes spot what the author can’t see.

    Thanks also for your mention of The Villain’s Journey. I struggled for years writing stories that didn’t hold together b/c I lost track of what the villain was doing offstage. That’s a major reason I wrote VJ.

    • Thanks for “The Villain’s Journey,” Debbie! Your tidbit about tracking what the villain is doing, even when he’s off screen, is a game changer.

  3. My husband & I were just talking about the “across town in 3 minutes” plot hole last night as we watched Taylor Sheridan’s latests spinoff “Dutton Ranch.” The guy lives in Texas and he still doesn’t get it right. (Or sacrifices it for his storyline) Beth and Rip’s new ranch is near the Mexican border in South Texas. Yet she drives from their ranch to Dallas, makes a stop on the way, does business, has supper and a drink, and drives back with time to discover their cattle have foot & mouth disease. We live near San Antonio & it’s a 5-hour plus drive to Dallas. To drive across Texas takes DAYS. Almost every TV show set in Texas gets this wrong. Sheridan does the same thing in Landman. Tommy’s always driving from west Texas to Dallas & back like it’s “three minutes across town.” To most viewers it doesn’t matter, but it takes me out of the story. Also, on the “cause and effect,” you’re so right about fresh eyes. My agent really pushed me on my latest suspense novel to identify the cause & effect throughout. I realized it was in my head but not on the page. I had to do a lot of work to fix it, but it was worth it.

    • I am also a Texan. I live in Houston, and I 100% agree. You cannot have people driving back and forth across the state in a day! Taylor Sheridan should definitely know better! The same thing happens a lot in stories that take place in LA, where you cannot get anywhere quickly.

  4. “If the hero can shrug and go get tacos, your plot is in trouble.” LOL! Thanks for my laugh this morning with this very visual wisdom. A powerful reminder to make sure the motive is strong and urgent.

    “Wait…where did that come from?” I’ve fallen prey to this one, and some of the others. I consider myself a newbie to mystery writing but all of these examples you describe are easy plot holes to fall into.

    Paying more attention to the killer’s/villain’s motives even off screen is essential. As is beta input.

    Great tips. Thanks!

    • Thanks, BK! I am glad to have given you a morning chuckle, although as a Texan I must tell you that there is always a lot of discussion about when and where to have tacos!

  5. Thanks for the good tips. I especially like this one:
    “A helpful test: if you can’t summarize the villain’s plan in 3 to 7 steps, it’s probably not clear enough in your head yet, which means it definitely won’t be clear on the page.”

    • I learned the trick of thinking about the villain’s plan and tracking what he’s doing, even when he’s off screen, from Debbie Burke’s book, “The Villain’s Journey,” and it has really improved my own plotting.

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