Picturing Your Characters

by James Scott Bell
@jamesscottbell

One of my favorite noirs is the 1944 classic Laura. Dana Andrews plays a NYC detective investigating the murder of the beautiful Laura Hunt (Gene Tierney). It becomes personal when he sees a framed portrait of Laura and is enraptured by it. And why shouldn’t he be? It’s Gene Tierney, after all.

I thought about this the other day when I read a story about the artist Sandro Botticelli (1445–1510) and his painting “Portrait of a Young Woman.” The subject was Simonetta Vespucci, wife of Marco Vespucci who was cousin to Amerigo, the explorer for whom our country was named (history lessons are no extra charge here at TKZ). Sadly, Simonetta died at age 22 or 23, probably of tuberculosis. Botticelli was clearly captivated by her beauty. I am, too.

Sandro Botticelli, “Portrait of a Young Woman” (1485)

I understand the allure of the Mona Lisa. Her enigmatic smile has been the source of centuries of speculation, and even song. Do you smile to tempt a lover, Mona Lisa? Or is this your way to hide a broken heart? But I admit sometimes she frustrates me.

Simonetta invites. I gaze at her eyes and wonder what’s going on behind them. She wears the trappings of wealth—a head covering festooned with pearls and feathers, and a medallion that may have been the gift of Lorenzo de Medici, the Florentine who was patron to both Botticelli and Michelangelo, and whose brother Giuliano may have been Simonetta’s lover.

Is she thinking, How did I ever get into this mess? Or, I’ve finally found happiness and I am at peace.

Well, just like with Mona Lisa, it’s not the answer that counts, but the imaginings and the various pathways they open in the vast neural networks of the mind.

Which is why I always find a visual for my characters.

When I start assembling my cast I first choose a name. I usually use Scrivener’s Name Generator for this. I start a Character Sheet and write what their role in the story will be.

Then I go looking for an image. Several authors I know use AI for their character images. My preferred method is simply to search Google Images for “Middle aged fisherman” or “Thirty year old businesswoman.” Then I scroll around looking for a face, and especially eyes that spark something unanticipated in me. That’s the key. I want to be surprised. I’ll copy that image into the Character Sheet then write some notes on what the eyes are saying to me.

Later I can open up the Corkboard View and see all the faces at once. When I write a scene, I can put the picture of a character onscreen as I type.

In the years before Google I used to buy magazines with lots of pictures, like Us and People (and no, I didn’t buy that picture magazine). I’d go through them and cut out faces and toss them in a box. When I started a project I’d take out the box and play casting director.

Much easier now.

Shell Scott

In the 1950s, Richard Prather wrote a series of PI books that outsold all others except those by Mickey Spillane. His hero was Shell Scott, and his defining feature was a buzz cut of white-blond hair. The publisher, Fawcett Gold Medal, decided to put a picture of Shell on the books.

 

Travis McGee

In the 1960s, John D. MacDonald gave us Travis McGee, and Fawcett did the same thing.

[FWIW, Sam Elliott played Travis in a TV movie and didn’t fit the profile at all. Much better was Rod Taylor in a little seen adaptation of Darker Than Amber (1970). Catch it if you can. Taylor is spot on.]

Personally, I think it’s better when readers form their own picture of a series lead. When I first conceived of Mike Romeo I went looking for a face…and found one that was, and is, perfect (for me). But I shan’t reveal who it is. Let the readers form the image for themselves. That gives them a “personal” Mike.

But for my own use in a project, a picture is a portal into a character’s soul.

What about you? Do you like to find pictures for your characters? Or are the pictures in your head enough?

7 thoughts on “Picturing Your Characters

  1. Interesting. That I can recall, I’ve never gone on a hunt for pictures that might represent a character and tend to go with what naturally forms in my head. But I’ll have to try that some time and see if a visual image agrees with or changes the image of a character that forms in my mind.

  2. I don’t look for images, but apparently don’t describe the characters in my mind well enough on the page. For example, an artist at Penguin Putnam got my heroine right on a cover, but depicted my hero as a swarthy Hispanic, when he was supposed to look more like a young Harrison Ford. I think I like the trend of not describing characters in minute detail, but as someone wrote on TKZ a while back, the romance genre calls for it. Female readers want to imagine themselves as the heroine, but the guy needs more detail so he comes alive. I did get letters asking who I used for a protagonist. What, so they could look him up and meet him? I

  3. I’ve hunted up pictures for my protagonists, but rarely for other characters. And mostly in my romantic suspense books, because readers expect more descriptions. Back in the day, romance covers often had the hero with only part of his head visible, and the explanation was the opposite of what Becky stated. Readers wanted to imagine the hero to fit their ideal man, so covers weren’t specific.

  4. I don’t tend to visualize in high-def. On John Green’s apple visualization scale (https://www.distractify.com/p/how-we-visualize-apples), with 1 being and apple in vivid HD and 5 being nothing, I’m probably a 3. That said, with focus, I can up the detail, but my default is lower. Same for characters, it’s more of an impression of who they are, their emotions etc.

    However, with my amateur sleuth Meg Booker, I did do a casting call to find someone she looks like, and that was helpful.

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