Truth and Fiction

It seems that going down a rabbit hole while doing online research is a given. Sometimes we find what we need at the outset and can escape within minutes, but I’ve spent hours following one lead to another only to wind up watching cute puppy videos.

When writing these days, I might come to a place that needs specific details such as a type or caliber of pistol, or what to call the round hole in a wood stove (the hob), or the vegetation in a specific part of Texas, but I do my best not to get sidetracked. Instead, I use those opportunities as short breaks from the work in progress to add bits and pieces of accumulated background information to my story, instead of spending days or weeks digging around to find so much minutia that the manuscript will resemble an eycyclopedia.

But I’m working on the second weird western in a new series (the contract is almost here!) and this time needed a little background information about the lands owned and controlled by the Comanches in the middle to late 1800s. I’d looked at a number of online maps to get a sense of the area called Comancheria, but I needed to walk the country and see and smell it up close for myself.

To do this, another couple we’ve known for decades joined the Bride and I in a week-long getaway to the Texas Panhandle, and specifically the Palo Duro Canyon, the Lone Star version of the Grand Canyon.

Some of our plans went awry when wildfires swept across the panhandle, preventing us from visiting a couple historical sites I wanted to see. Instead, we traveled south of that area, settling ourselves in a wonderful house on the rim of the canyon. It became our base camp of sorts.

The first trip was to visit the Charles Goodnight home, a restored structure built in 1888 by a bigger than life cowman and plainsman who was instrumental in settling west Texas. He served as a Texas Ranger, scout, established the JA Ranch in the Palo Duro area, invented the chuckwagon, and blazed a number of trails for cattle drives all the way to Wyoming.

We hiked the canyon, found the location of Goodnight’s 1877 ranch at the bottom, watched wildlife, sunrises and sunsets, and studied the light that seemed to change down in there every hour. We stood where Comanches camped, and imagined what it was like when the cavalry finally caught up with them one morning and broke the back of that tribe’s resistance forever by massacring women and children.

When we returned, my traveling buddy, Steve Knagg, (who has been a fan of Mr. Goodnight for years) gave me a biography first published in 1936. A history buff anyway, and knowing this volume contained enormous amounts of information, I sat down to read and couldn’t stop.

Before long it was full of notes on scraps of paper, marked pages, and sticky tabs. I quickly realized that Goodnight and the country he rode would figure predominantly in my next manuscript. However, it won’t be the first time his exploits have appeared in a fictional novel.

Most native Texans know the story of Goodnight, and the establishment of cattle trails in the 1870s and 80s, and are somewhat familiar with the famous Goodnight-Loving trail. I’d read books about this time period and these men before, and knew that Larry McMurtry loosely based Lonesome Dove on their adventures. I was surprised to see how well he used history to support the storyline.

The fictional and actual events paralleled closely as I read the real account of early Texas, written by J. Evetts Haley. It was eerie, since I’ve absorbed the novel Lonesome Dove at least half a dozen times, and watched the movie more times than I can recall. It sparked an interesting sense of déjà vu.

That came from the amount of real history McMurtry wove into that Pulitzer Prize winning novel released in 1985.

For example, did you know that August McCrae and Woodrow Call were based on Charles Goodnight and Oliver Loving? Many Texas history buffs have an inkling, but those two wonderful fictional characters are rooted in Texas lore.

The near-fatal engagement between Gus and the Cheyenne in Montana was based on a fight between Goodnight and a Comanche war party. It really occurred on the Pecos River in New Mexico and his real partner who escaped to find help was named One-Armed Wilson (in the book it was Pea Eye, played by Timothy Scott in the movie).

In the book, Gus lost his leg in Miles City after a long cattle drive, but in reality, Oliver Loving lost an arm to gangrene in New Mexico. Both eventually passed away from their wounds.

Like Woodrow Call who hauled Gus back from Montana to a pecan grove in Texas, Goodnight brought his old friend back from Ft. Sumner, New Mexico, to Weatherford, Texas for burial, (nearly 450 miles), but he didn’t make the trip alone. He was accompanied by half a dozen cowboys who escorted the body in a somber funeral party.

One of the characters in the book, a scout named Deets, was inspired by a cowboy and close friend to Goodnight, Bose Ikard (inset below). Unlike Deets who was killed by a young warrior, Ikard died of natural causes in 1929, but Goodnight’s respect for the man was so high that he really did carve a headstone with some of the same phrases later used in the book and movie.

Actual Epitaph: Served with me four years on the Goodnight-Loving Trail, never shirked a duty or disobeyed and order, rode with me in many stampedes, participated in three engagements with Comanches. Splendid behavior.

Fictional Epitaph: Josh Deets. Served with me 30 years. Fought in 21 engagements with the Comanches and Kiowa. Cheerful in all weathers.

I’ve had writers tell me they’re afraid to use real people or events because they feel it’s some kind of plagiarism, or they’ll face legal challenges from family or other entities, or at the very least, it’s stealing in some sense. The discussion above proves it’s perfectly all right to base characters on historic figures who inspire a story, and by changing the names, locations, and specifics to suit the plot under construction, the fictional actors are yours.

McMurtry did it, and wove an incredible story of two men who have immortalized the old west, even though Lonesome Dove was never meant to be a faithful depiction of Charles Goodnight and Oliver Loving, but became a wonderfully failed attempt to demystify traditional westerns.

Oh, and full disclosure about that great author, I have a story about how he snubbed me over twenty years ago by turning his back and walking away as I thanked him for his inspiration and body of work, but that’s another story.

Here’s the point. It’s all right to draw from history to create fiction, and the truth be told, I followed McMurtry’s lead and used historical characters and events in my aforementioned upcoming weird western, Comancheria, so I’m-a doin’ it again with this second book in the series.

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About Reavis Wortham

Two time Spur Award winning author Reavis Z. Wortham pens the Texas Red River historical mystery series, and the high-octane Sonny Hawke contemporary western thrillers. His new Tucker Snow series begins in 2022. The Red River books are set in rural Northeast Texas in the 1960s. Kirkus Reviews listed his first novel in a Starred Review, The Rock Hole, as one of the “Top 12 Mysteries of 2011.” His Sonny Hawke series from Kensington Publishing features Texas Ranger Sonny Hawke and debuted in 2018 with Hawke’s Prey. Hawke’s War, the second in this series won the Spur Award from the Western Writers Association of America as the Best Mass Market Paperback of 2019. He also garnered a second Spur for Hawke’s Target in 2020. A frequent speaker at literary events across the country. Reavis also teaches seminars on mystery and thriller writing techniques at a wide variety of venues, from local libraries to writing conventions, to the Pat Conroy Literary Center in Beaufort, SC. He frequently speaks to smaller groups, encouraging future authors, and offers dozens of tips for them to avoid the writing pitfalls and hazards he has survived. His most popular talk is entitled, My Road to Publication, and Other Great Disasters. He has been a newspaper columnist and magazine writer since 1988, penning over 2,000 columns and articles, and has been the Humor Editor for Texas Fish and Game Magazine for the past 25 years. He and his wife, Shana, live in Northeast Texas. All his works are available at your favorite online bookstore or outlet, in all formats. Check out his website at www.reaviszwortham.com. “Burrows, Wortham’s outstanding sequel to The Rock Hole combines the gonzo sensibility of Joe R. Lansdale and the elegiac mood of To Kill a Mockingbird to strike just the right balance between childhood innocence and adult horror.” —Publishers Weekly (starred review) “The cinematic characters have substance and a pulse. They walk off the page and talk Texas.” —The Dallas Morning News On his most recent Red River novel, Laying Bones: “Captivating. Wortham adroitly balances richly nuanced human drama with two-fisted action, and displays a knack for the striking phrase (‘R.B. was the best drunk driver in the county, and I don’t believe he run off in here on his own’). This entry is sure to win the author new fans.” —Publishers Weekly “Well-drawn characters and clever blending of light and dark kept this reader thinking of Ray Bradbury’s Something Wicked This Way Comes, and Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird.” —Mystery Scene Magazine

13 thoughts on “Truth and Fiction

  1. Rev, thanks for demonstrating how real-life people and events from history can be used to create fictional stories. In today’s uncertain world, I’m increasingly tempted to write about earlier times. At least we know how troubles that happened back then ended.

    See ya down the rabbit hole.

  2. Yep, not only all right to base characters on real people, but in historical novels you can use the real people, themselves. Just try to be true to their real personalities (unless you’re writing obvious fantasy, e.g., Abraham Lincoln, Vampire Hunter).

    I wrote a series of historical novels set in L.A. in the early 1900s. Lots of people show up–Wm. Randolph Hearst, John Barrymore, even Teddy Roosevelt (I found his appearance in L.A. via the microfilm of the L.A. Times and extrapolated a scene from that. Did hours of rabbit hole exploring in the downtown branch of the L.A. Library).

    • You’re absolutely right about using real people. Bat Masterson makes an appearance in Comancheria as a young buffalo hunter, which he really did. He was at the famous fight at Adobe Walls. I love to see real folks show up in a book.

  3. I’ve plunged down that rabbit hole in the past, and am not eager to repeat. My thriller, wherein Carl Jung is coerced by OKW General Olbricht to visit Austria and assess Adolf Hitler’s sanity, began life as a short play in February of 2011, was reformatted as a screenplay around August of that same year, then revised as a novel in 2013, and published in final form on April 9th of 2016.

    There were challenges, primarily that for almost every factoid about Hitler, there exists its refutation. I surmise that Hitler was in the habit of telling different people different versions of the same story, with the intent of seeing which version made its way back to him.

    I discovered things previously unrecorded about “Der Failure,” among them: 1. The name of another suspect for his mystery grandfather, someone known to have lived in the same town as his grandmother, 2. Why and how he murdered Geli Raubal, and how he got away with it. 3. Another reason for attacking Russia when he did, possibly the most important. 4. He may have had an nTBI at age 11 that could explain his behavior.

    Few have commented about the role that their oaths of loyalty to Hitler played in German officers’ actions. They took those promises much more seriously than is true for present-day functionaries, and did terrible things as a result.

  4. Enjoyed this post, Mr. Wortham!

    The Lonesome Dove series is one of my favorites, watched and re-watched, and the historic details in this offering are fascinating.

    Happy weekending… 🙂

  5. Yep. Fellow rabbit-hole spelunker here. My first historical fiction novel definitely combined real characters and events. In my case, the time was so long ago—400+ years—and the known facts so few that I had plenty of room to make up stuff to suit the story.

    BTW, I spotted your “I’m-a doin’ it” and chuckled. My current WIP has a Texas country girl who’s doin’ a lot of runnin’ and gunnin’. And she’s got one in the chute, being pregnant and all.

    Hasta la proxima!

  6. The 19th century American West is my gig. I want to fall down as many rabbit holes as I can. And I wouldn’t want to write a book that didn’t require historical research because the book would be no fun to write and the modern age just doesn’t grab me.

    And thanks for the tip of the J. Evvets Haley biography of Charles Goodnight. I’m gonna put that on my TBR pile. Despite Texas’ strong influence, I haven’t had opportunity to do much Texas specific research of the period.

    There aren’t anywhere near enough hours in the day to do historical research, sadly. I’m currently in essence starting over with research, having to “leap forward” from the mid-19th century to 1917–and finding out how little I truly know about WWI–even things like why our soldiers were called Doughboys. To me that’s the little guy in the commercial that you poke in the stomach and make him laugh. I’m not sure but I doubt Pillsbury was a thing in 1917. LOL!

    But it is so awesome to research historical periods and imagine “What if” scenarios for stories. Couldn’t live my life without it.

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