For the Love of It–Words of Wisdom

Back in 2016 when I was working on the first two novels in the Empowered series and taking a self-study crash course in indie publishing, “writing to market” was the topic d’jour in indie author circles and on self-publishing podcasts. Chris Fox’s Write To Market laid out how to do this. I have indie author friends who were adroit at figuring out the tropes and trends in their particular sub-genre and successfully hit their particular market’ bull’s-eye.

Contrast that with advice I’d read years before, from agents and editors, to be aware of the market, but not chase it, since you’ll always be behind. Instead write the story that you most want to tell, which still seems like very sound advice. Another way of putting it is to know the reader expectations of your particular genre, but first and foremost, write what you love. Finding the place on the publishing Venn diagram where those expectations and what you love intersect can connect you with readers.

Today’s Words of Wisdom looks at the importance of writing “for the love of it.” Rather than the usual trio of excerpts we have a quartet of briefer ones on writing what you love, the different kinds of love you need, how writing what you love can rejuvenate and power your writing, and how love for a project can be a vital factor in your success. Two are from JSB, since they build nicely off each other. Even more than usual, given the short length of the excerpts, it is worth checking out the full versions, which are linked at the bottom of their respective enteries here.

I thought I’d follow on from Jim’s terrific post yesterday about writing with heart, and discuss an issue that is just as important in my view – writing what you love and not what you think the market will love. It drives me crazy when people say “you should write a romance – you’d make more money that way” or (even weirder) “You should write erotica – it’s really hot (no pun intended) right now.” For some reason there always seem to people wanting to make ‘helpful suggestions’ on what you should write – usually by pointing out the ‘hot’ genre on the current bestseller list, as if that is all it takes. Hey, if you just added a paranormal element to your mystery, shazam, you’d have it made.

If only it was that easy…For many wannabe writers the thought of becoming the next J K Rowling or Stephenie Meyers is enticement enough, as is the belief that somehow if you write to what you think the market wants, your future will be secure. Wrong.

Setting aside the obvious (that by the time you’ve written what the market loves now, the market has already shifted to something else) there is something more fundamental at stake. As my agent always says, you must write what you love. Why? Because it shows.

It shows if you are writing a romance when you think it’s ‘easy money’. It shows if you write a YA fantasy when you really want to write contemporary thrillers…If your heart isn’t in it, the readers will know you’re faking it.

Clare Langley-Hawthrone–June 14, 2010

The world is full of entertaining distractions, and many of them would give me more pleasure than writing my novel would, at least in the short term. Yet I convince myself that this isn’t true. I put down my newspaper and tell myself, “You know what? My novel is more interesting than the CIA director’s scandalous affair. So what, the guy fooled around with a fawning younger woman, what’s so interesting about that? Come on, stop searching the Internet for lubricious details. Stop exchanging snarky e-mails with your friends. Get back to work!”

And this brings me to the second lie I tell myself. At some point in the process of writing a novel I become convinced that this book is the best thing I’ve ever written. No — the best thing ever written by anybody. Crazy, right? The lie is so absurd I can’t seriously entertain it for very long. But it’s a useful delusion to have, especially when I’m struggling with the book and the deadline is approaching and I have to devote practically every waking moment to finishing the damn thing. Why put in all the effort if the novel isn’t fantastic?

Then I finish the first draft and stop telling myself the lies. They’ve served their purpose, so I don’t have to believe them anymore. I wait a few weeks, and then I’m ready to look at the manuscript again and confront the truth: the book is a mess. Some parts don’t make sense, other parts are boring. I don’t love the book anymore. But I don’t hate it either. Now it’s time for some tough love. An intervention. I have to whip the manuscript into shape.

And then, after all the revisions are done and the final changes sent to the copy editor and the advance reading copies distributed to the reviewers, then I’m ready to fall in love with the book again. But this time it’s not a blind, self-deluding infatuation. I’ve done my best to fix the novel’s flaws, but I know it’ll never be perfect. I love the book despite its imperfections and infelicities. I’m at this stage now with my next novel, which will be published in February. I’m still collecting blurbs and composing the jacket copy, but I can’t make any major changes to the book. This stage is the literary equivalent of zipping up your lover’s dress and clasping the pearls around her neck, getting her ready for her big night on the town.

Go out there, beautiful. Knock ’em dead.

Mark Alpert—November 17, 2012

 

We have to have that in our writing if we’re going to keep doing this for the long term. You’ve only got so much time. Give that time to the stories you’re burning to tell. Do that first, and the money will follow. How much, no one can say. But joy tips the balance in your favor. For example, in addition to my novels and novellas, I’m writing short stories about a boxer in 1950s Los Angeles. I make some scratch every month on these. But more than that, I love writing them. It’s a different voice and genre than I normally write in, which has the added benefit of keeping my writing chops sharp.

If you love what you do you’ll do more of it, and  you’ll do it better, and that will increase the odds of making a decent buck at this—either through self-publishing or finding a traditional publisher who believes in your voice and vision. Or some combination of the two.

So my question for you today is, do you love what you’re writing? If not, why not?

James Scott Bell—September 29, 2013 

  1. Love

An inner fire to make it as a writer will get you through years of cold reality. I suspect that the majority of writers who make it to full-time status love what they do. Writing is a part of them, a calling as well as a vocation.

It’s certainly possible to write out of sheer business-mindedness (I think, however, that this is much easier when you write non-fiction). Yet there’s a certain something that gets translated to the page by the writer who loves the work. I believe you can write what you love and, if you do so with the other characteristics listed below, earn a fair return.

  1. Discipline

“One of the big lessons of sports for dedicated individuals and teams is that it shows us how hard work, and I mean hard work, does pay dividends.” – John Wooden, legendary UCLA basketball coach

Love is not enough. Ask anyone who’s married.

Work puts legs on the dream.

  1. Perseverance 

“The brick walls are there for a reason. The brick walls are not there to keep us out. The brick walls are there to give us a chance to show how badly we want something. Because the brick walls are there to stop the people who don’t want it badly enough. They’re there to stop the other people.” – Randy Pausch, “The Last Lecture”

The true writer puts this thought in mind: I am going to write and never stop because that’s what I want to do. I will keep learning and growing and producing the words. I’ll keep carving out time to write, even if it means giving some things up. And it will always be too soon to quit. 

James Scott Bell—November 2, 2014

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  1. Where are you on the spectrum of writing for love – writing to market? Does writing to market work for you?
  2. Do you maintain your love for a project throughout the process of writing it? Any tips?
  3. Has love for a particular story or novel rejuvenated your writing?
  4. How important is it to you to write what you love?

17 thoughts on “For the Love of It–Words of Wisdom

  1. I love Alpert’s advice. Think I’ll try loving my WIP as if it’s the greatest thing ever penned. I’m already excited to get back to it!

    I think writing to market carries a danger of not enjoying the process.

  2. Great topic and great articles, Dale.

    “Write what you love” is very important to me. I’m at a point where I am going to have to give up some other things in my life to give adequate time to writing. It helps that the old body doesn’t tolerate some of the other physically demanding things, but still hard to accept.

    I’m working on the last book in a series and finding that I have more “love” for planning the new series than finishing the current book. There is definitely a point where discipline must bridge the gap in the love.

    Have a great weekend!

    • Thanks, Steve! Before I retired from my library job, retired patrons used to tell me that they never had enough time to do everything they wanted to. Now, nearly four years since I retired, I understand. Changing physical circumstances are a challenge for sure. I’m so glad we writers can follow our passion throughout our live if we so choose.

      The lure of “the shiny new” is real. Here’s to discipline carrying you across the finish line!

      Have a wonderful weekend!

  3. I could never in a million years write to market in the broad sense. What’s hugely popular with the masses tends to make me yawn. Just as I’ve never been blown away when I bothered to read one of those “You gotta read this! It’s a classic!”

    However I don’t maintain love for a project throughout the entire process. Now is a good example. I’ve got a manuscript going to a few betas. I’m so heartily sick of reading and re-reading the manuscript I NEED to put it in someone else’s hands who can give it a fresh look. And hearing their feedback (and having a few months’ distance from the manuscript) will bring back the love again.

    Bottom line is that writing a book is a very time consuming process. I don’t know how people commit themselves to all that time to write something they don’t truly love.

    • Great point, BK, about distance from a project restoring some of the love for it. It can certainly bring a little objectivity–I find it all to easy to succumb to self-criticism about a book (or my writing in general) which objectivity can help banish..

  4. Loving what you write is crucial on so many levels. Readers can sense when you’ve phoned it in.

    There are so many easier ways to make money, so why not write what you love?

  5. 1. Where are you on the spectrum of writing for love – writing to market? Does writing to market work for you?

    I write for love, not to the market. Couldn’t do it any other way.

    2. Do you maintain your love for a project throughout the process of writing it? Any tips?

    Absolutely! One thing that works well for me is to stop mid-scene, with a side note of the goal. The next day, it’s much easier to pick up where I left off than start fresh with a new scene.

    3. Has love for a particular story or novel rejuvenated your writing?
    Not a particular story or novel but a genre switch. Once I veered my Mayhem Series from psychological thrillers to eco-thrillers, it ignited a passion within me and the novels are pouring out of me faster than I can type.

    4. How important is it to you to write what you love?
    It’s everything. Passion shines through every scene.

    Hope you have a wonderful weekend, my friend!

    • Wonderful answers, Sue! Great tip on stopping mid-scene, noting the goal so that you can jump back in next day and ride that energy. It’s so inspiring to hear how your genre switch has reignited your passion.

      Have a fantastic weekend, my friend! The skies have been clear here for the past few days, so I’ve gotten in some rejuvenating stargazing.

  6. Authors who write the next big thing call themselves trend whores. The problem with this in traditional publishing is the time from writing to publishing allows that trend to die an ugly death before your book is picked up by a publisher. Self-pubs can surf the trends like a dolphin. They also have books out for those who like that trend when the traditional publishers move to the next trend.

  7. Good questions and always good wisdom from the past, Dale.

    1. I don’t write to the market per se, but my stories incorporate timely news topics that concern me–deep fakes, the surveillance state, unintended consequences of Covid lockdowns, vulnerability of the power grid, etc. and how these factors affect “real” people–characters in books are real, aren’t they? 😉

    2. Mostly I love the process b/c I’m concerned about the characters in bad situations, same way as I am about friends in real life. Unlike real life, at least I can solve the characters’ problems!

    3. Flight to Forever was my passion project based on an elderly couple I knew who’d been married for many years but were separated during the pandemic.

    4. Very important. Money would be nice but that’s not why I write.

    • Yes, solving problems, at least fictionally, is a great motivation for the love of writing.

  8. For me, starting a novel is like falling in love. At first, I see the story as a beautiful idea, perfectly formed. But over the months that follow, I find there are flaws, and my love matures beyond the nascent stage to find joy in the hard work of molding the story. That’s where the real love of writing is for me, and I won’t chase the market to get there.

    • Finding “joy in the hard work of molding the story,” will keep your writing going forever. That’s where the real love of writing is for me, too. Well said!

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