The Ten Events of the Highly Successful Writer

by James Scott Bell
@jamesscottbell

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Bob Mathias

One of the greatest athletes America ever produced was Bob Mathias. Listen to this: in 1948 Mathias was a high school student in Tulare, California. His track coach mentioned he ought to consider the decathlon. This is, of course, ten events, several of which Mathias had never attempted. They trained for three weeks. Three. Mathias won the local AAU decathlon. A short time later, he won the nationals and Olympic trials.

Mathias went to the London games and won the gold medal. He was seventeen-years-old, the youngest person ever to win a gold in track and field.

In 1952 he went to the Olympics in Helsinki, and did what no one had ever done before—he won the decathlon again. To top it all off, he starred as himself in the movie The Bob Mathias Story, which I watched several times as a kid.

I thought of Mathias a few days ago when I read this phrase once again: “A writing career is not a sprint, it’s a marathon.” It suddenly occurred to me that this is inadequate. Why? Because it doesn’t matter if you run 26 miles if it’s in the wrong direction!

Instead, I think a successful writing career is more like a decathlon. There are at least ten “events” you must master in order to compete and win a medal. Here they are:

  1. Dedication

Are you willing to put in the work? Pay the price? Stick with it and not give up? Will you stay with this even though it’s going to take you years to get there?

Olympic champions start young and spend countless hours practicing, for years, for that one shot at gold. Similarly, it takes a long time and a lot of work to gain a writing foothold these days.

While there are no hard rules on this, suppose I told you that it’s going to take you five years and five quality books to start making solid income as a writer? Will you still go for it?

I hope so.

  1. Production

Decathletes have to spend a set amount of time every week in training. A writer has to spend a set amount of time every week writing.

You don’t produce books by not writing them. (Maybe I should go into the Zen koan business. Or not.)

Seriously, when I hear people say, “I just can’t write to a quota. I have to get into the mood,” I hear the sound of a cash register not ringing. (See? Zen master!)

  1. Quality

In sports, practice does not make perfect. Perfect practice makes perfect. The precision of your drills is what makes the difference when it comes time for actual competition.

So the words you produce must be quality words. By quality I mean this: the best you can do while keeping your audience in mind.

Who is your audience? Readers. If you’re writing in a genre, you know those readers have certain expectations. You must serve those expectations at the same time you are exceeding them. How? By being an original, surprising them, elevating your book beyond the merely competent.

How do you get to that point? See #4.

  1. Study

A decathlete watches film of great athletes competing in certain events. Slow motion of champion pole vaulters, shot putters, discus and javelin throwers. You hone your skills partly by studying what others do well.

I can’t understand writers wanting to get ahead in the fiction game not making study of the craft a regular habit. I simply do not get it. Do you want some fresh-out-of-med-school doctor who doesn’t read the medical journals or observe experienced surgeons taking out your spleen?

At least when a writer makes mistakes nobody dies. But the interest of a reader does. And that can mean death to a career.

  1. Creativity

Did you know that every decathlete before 1968 used either the scissor kick or Western roll for the high jump? That’s because those two techniques were the only ones the dedicated high jumpers ever employed.

Then along came a guy named Dick Fosbury who, in high school, wasn’t able to win in the

Dick Fosbury

Dick Fosbury

high jump using old-school technique. Over the course of time he experimented with methods until he started going over the bar backwards, something no one had ever contemplated before. He began to set records with “The Fosbury Flop” and he won the gold medal at the ’68 Olympics in Mexico City.

All high jumpers and decathletes now use the Flop.

Writer, you need to nurture your creativity, try new things, play and explore. You still need to jump over the bar. How you do that is your individual style.

  1. Goals

Great athletes give themselves benchmarks to shoot for, and put in place plans to reach them. These goals are measurable. In other words, they can be assessed according to what was done or not done, what was accomplished or not accomplished. Then there is a time for reassessment and recommitment.

Writers need to set goals, too. Not just word count, but the development of future projects, craft study objectives, social media presence, even personal health (which affects production). Goal setting is one of the essential skills of success.

I prepared a short monograph on this topic that can be found HERE.

  1. Perseverance

Every champion athlete has had setbacks, losses, injuries. There are many, many times when quitting seems like an option. Those are the very times the great ones push on. Like Rocky Bleier, the Pittsburgh Steelers running back who came home from service in Vietnam with a right leg shredded by shrapnel. Coaches and doctors told him to give up football. He refused, and worked harder than everyone else. For two long years he struggled, and made the team again. Two years after that he was a starter. Two years after that he gained 1,000 yards for the season.

The writing life has plenty of frustration and disappointment. A rejection can feel like a shredding of your soul. That’s when you let it hurt for half an hour. Pound a pillow. Eat some ice cream. Cry if you must. But then take a deep breath and go to your keyboard and write something. Anything. You cannot be defeated if you keep pounding the keys.

  1. Courage 

In addition to perseverance, champions have times during an event where they must reach down deep and tap a reservoir of courage. That’s certainly true in the decathlon, the most demanding two days in all of sports. When Rafer Johnson competed for the United States in the Rome Olympics in 1960, he was coming off the effects of an auto accident the year before. His big rival (and UCLA teammate) was C. K. Yang, competing for Taiwan. It all came down to the final event, the grueling 1,500 meter run. Johnson needed to stay within ten seconds of Yang in order to win. But Yang was almost twenty seconds better at this event than Johnson. Johnson reached inside and willed himself to dog Yang’s heels. He finished only 1.2 seconds behind Yang, and took home the gold.

There are times in your writing when you have to dig deep, keep going, try harder. It may just mean hanging on for one last lap. The great thing is, even if things don’t turn out quite the way you want, you will be a stronger writer because of it. No effort is wasted.

  1. Balance

Athletes have to give their bodies time to recover from an intense workout. There is a delicate balance between exertion and rest. And when it’s a young athlete, they have to figure in school work and a bit of a social life. The number of athletes who were driven too hard by an overzealous parent, and ended up out of athletics altogether, are legion. See, for example, Todd Marinovich.

There is a time to rest as a writer. Personally, I write six days a week. I take Sundays off. It’s hard. I’m like a horse that wants and expects to run on the track. But the day off gives my mind time to rest and recharge. I come to Monday raring to go.

And don’t forget the people in your life. Give them the time they deserve, even though you may have to explain that far off look you get sometimes. You know, the one where you’re thinking what a great scene this would make, or how that bartender over there would be a terrific minor character…

  1. Joy

A champion athlete has to take joy in his event. Eric Liddell, the Scottish sprinter who won a gold medal in the 440 at the1924 games, was depicted in the movie Chariots of Fire. As the son of a missionary, he was expected to go to the mission field, leaving athletics behind. After his sister reprimands him, Liddel replies, “I believe God made me for a purpose, but He also made me fast. And when I run, I feel His pleasure.”

“In the great story-tellers, there is a sort of self-enjoyment in the exercise of the sense of narrative; and this, by sheer contagion, communicates enjoyment to the reader. Perhaps it may be called (by analogy with the familiar phrase, “the joy of living”) the joy of telling tales. The joy of telling tales which shines through Treasure Island is perhaps the main reason for the continued popularity of the story. The author is having such a good time in telling his tale that he gives us necessarily a good time in reading it.”Clayton Meeker Hamilton, A Manual of the Art of Fiction (1919)

Just as the decathlon is the toughest of athletic contests, so the writing life is one of the toughest ways to make a buck. Yet isn’t that what makes it worthwhile? When you score a win, and you will––you’ll finish that novel, you’ll start to see some sales, you’ll get an email from a delighted reader––you’ll feel that joy of accomplishment that the ne’er do wells never do.

The easy road is for chumps.

Keep writing.

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30 thoughts on “The Ten Events of the Highly Successful Writer

  1. Preach it, brother. It’s sad to see writers taking short cuts that are actually counter-productive. You have to master those basic skills before you can crank out the hits.

    Then the real work begins!

  2. Great post. Thank you for continuing to provide inspiration and practical, hands-on mechanics in your weekly You-Can-Do-It.

  3. Love this, Jim. I think authors sometimes forget that we won’t be making much money till book #5. It’s unreasonable to believe we will; we’re still building an audience. But if we keep producing solid work, as you say, we’ll get there. I’m in it for the long haul, and I’m enjoying the journey.

  4. Jim, thanks for an inspirational post, our sermon for the day.

    Go forth with your battery recharged.

    Question: Could we add “Sacrifice” to title #1 – Dedication? I hit #7 – Perseverance and thought we had covered that in #1, then went back and read the second sentence, “Pay the price.” Then I saw the difference. #1 Dedication is what we are willing to sacrifice to achieve our goal.

    Thanks for a great post!

    • It’s true, Steve, that any worthwhile venture involves giving up something else. I recall a business principle I heard once: “Successful people are in the habit of doing the things unsuccessful people don’t like to do.” I think about that one a lot.

  5. All good points for us to drill into our brain.

    Plus, as a totally non-sports person, I get more information on sports figures here than in anything else I come in contact with on a given day. 😎 Don’t think I’d ever heard of the Fosbury flop until you (or someone else at TKZ) had mentioned it in a previous post. It helped me answer a Jeopardy question. LOL!

    • We are all for trivia here at TKZ, BK. So long as it falls between lots of quality content!

      Speaking of Jeopardy and long-term success, Alex Trebek has one great gig, doesn’t he?

  6. The ne’er do wells ne’er do well because, well, they ne’re do…

    🙂

    Thanks for a new perspective and (continued) encouragement.

    g

  7. I enjoyed this post much. I appreciate your list of what it takes to be successful. You even made me want to look up Bob Mathias and compare him to other great athletes of the last 100 years, e.g., Jim Thorpe, Ali, Federer. I particularly liked #9 (Balance) because it doesn’t seem to get as much attention as some of the others. Keeping both our minds and bodies working at peak performance levels seems to require both working them hard and resting them well in proper balance. And, as you suggest, part of ‘rest’ is giving the people in your life the time they deserve and need from you and the time you deserve and need from them….

    On a related note, it was intriguing to find out in the recent movie “Pawn Sacrifice” that Bobby Fischer worked out very hard physically to prepare for his chess matches. He said this would help his mind (focus) endure the long (4, 5, 6 hours and longer) chess matches. He would often simply outlast his opponents in terms of his ability to stay focused because he was physically prepared for any length of match.

    Thanks again.

    • John, glad you got to know a little about Mathias. You mentioned Jim Thorpe, who most say was our greatest athlete, at least for the first half of the 20th century. He played multiple sports, as did Mathias, and as did Jackie Robinson, who has to rank up there, too.

  8. Well, grab your Kleenex for this read. Maybe it’s hormones or maybe I’ve really been struggling this week but this refreshed my soul.

    Interesting what is now the norm was once dubbed a flop. My husband used that story on several occasions as a high school coach. Always got the team fired up and the same here.

    5 years/5 books – Yes! I Can do that! I will do that.

    Thanks Jim

  9. Well done, Jim. As an old worn out jock myself, this resonated with me.

    As I read it, one thought kept poking me. Not that it is missing from your piece… indeed, it is perhaps an “outcome” of the “quality” step. But it is this: STRENGTH. Mathias certainly had it. Stephen King has it. You have it. I strive for it. Strength relates not only to execution, but to the “great unspoken” do-or-die lynchpin of craft, which is… your story IDEA/CONCEPT/PREMISE needs to be STRONG. There is a sense within the general writing conversation (especially at workshops) that nobody can or should challenge your “idea” as a chance to improve your odds, and yet easily half of the rejected stories (and self-published stories that don’t do well) are precisely because of this reason. These stories often get rejection slips like this:

    “Thanks for submission. You are a good writer and the story is well crafted, but it’s just not for us. Best of luck elsewhere.”

    As a story coach I see this all the time – a story that is already trite or worn out or weak in the knees at the idea/concept/premise stage, putting the writer in the position of having to “make chicken salad out of a sow’s ear” (to combine two metaphors, and thus avoid the inevitable dark adjective that applies).

    Nailing a great idea is half the battle. We all believe our story ideas are worthy, and if you’re only writing for YOU, then that’s valid. What’s harder for writers with commercial aspirations is a sense of what stories will resonate widely, and yet it’s true that we should write from the heart. Bit of a paradox there. The key is to echo a wide breadth of common passion and interest when we do.

    Thanks for the chance to chip in on this.

    • Right on, Larry. Perhaps by combining STUDY and CREATIVITY we can find that sweet spot where the best concepts emerge. Fosbury was a student as well as an innovator. He wouldn’t have developed The Flop had one of those aspects been missing.

      This dovetails nicely with Joe’s post from yesterday. We’re all trying to jump over a bar. How we do it is unique to us. If we just copy someone else, that’s a very low bar and sure, we can can get over that. But it won’t win us much.

  10. Jim, thank you so much for the post. It’s encouraging to remember that passion needs to be carried by the day in, day out practical disciplines that steer and support that burning desire to tell a story. It’s a wonderful balance for this writer’s soul.

    Thanks again,

    Mark

    • You’re welcome, Mark. What you say is quite true. I call it being a pro. A pro does not wait around for the inconstant Muse. He writes, sometimes with gritted teeth.

  11. Thank you, Sir, I did… But not without your inspired use of the phrase and my father’s imparting of the love of words and wordplay (Mr. Nash included).

  12. “But then take a deep breath and go to your keyboard and write something. Anything. You cannot be defeated if you keep pounding the keys.”

    Thanks. I needed this today. On day 10 of my resolution to DO SOMETHING EVERY DAY on the WIP, I almost faltered. I didn’t open the file until 4 p.m. because I was so mired in crap-a-tude. But you know what? I figured out the problem and now am moving on.

    I earned my glass of kir today. 🙂

  13. As others have said, an excellent post. The secret of success (although I guess it isn’t really a ‘secret’) is the same no matter what the field: work hard; reflect, learn and grow; don’t become complacent or overwrought with shit thinking; and be brave.

    Oh, and be nice to cats (I just added that last one, but seems like common sense to me!)

    Thanks for an excellent post, Jim.

  14. Thanks, James. I was in the giving up stage this week. I’ve obviously been thinking writing is a sprint. Putting it in the realm of marathon is a wonderful way to see it.

    Thanks for your time in putting this together. We writers can be such a fragile lot, and a thicker skin is necessary for the long haul.

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