Okay, we’re starting out today with a quiz. No Google-cheating for the answers either. Here are the original titles for some books. I guarantee you’ve read at least one. (I’ve read them all which is why I picked them) Can you guess what they wound up being called?
The Last Man in Europe
They Don’t Build Statues to Businessmen
At This Point in Time
Now let’s talk about what you’re going to call your book. Because this is the most important marketing decision you will make and frankly, given the quality of some titles out there, we all need some help on this front.
The naming of books is a difficult matter.
It isn’t just one of your holiday games.
You may think at first I’m as mad as a hatter
when I tell you, a book must have three different names.
Apologies to T.S. Eliot but I’ve found that his rhyme about naming cats works for books. In my life I’ve had sixteen cats and published sixteen books. Weird stat, huh? Got me thinking about how important a name is when it comes to your book.
How important? I found a marketing survey that asked readers what was the element that most influenced why they bought a book. Excluding Gigantoid Author Name (ie James Patterson can put his name on an Altoid can and it would sell) here is the order:
3. Back copy
4. Opening paragraphs
This is why when Carson McCullers submitted her first novel The Mute to Houghton-Mifflin they bought it and renamed the book The Heart Is a Lonely Hunter. This is why after William Golding’s first novel Strangers from Within was plucked from Faber and Faber’s slush pile, it was retitled Lord of the Flies.
First impressions count. And your title is like a business card, a quick but well-calculated introduction you offer your reader in the hopes it will entice her to want to know more. It doesn’t matter if you’re traditionally published or doing it yourself, the wrong title can make or break your book – and you.
Going traditional? In your average publishing house, there will be many people with their hands on your book: editors, sales reps, marketing managers, publicists, even book buyers at the major booksellers will weigh in on the consumer appeal of your title. (Walmart threatened to not stock our book South of Hell because of the title; they backed off) Chances are your title will be challenged or even changed.
Going self-published? What you call your book will be entirely up to you so it’s really important to understand what a title needs to do. More on that in a moment.
Let’s go back to T.S. Eliot for a sec. He says that cats have three names: the first is the one the family uses in every day life. For us this was UNTITLED LOUIS KINCAID THRILLER NO. 1. That’s how it appeared on our contract. Lots of writers call their book WIP or The Book. Or in some sad cases, That Thing That Has Eaten Up My Life For Ten Years.
Eliot’s second name for cats is “fancier names that sound sweeter.” For us, it was The Last Rose of Summer, the title we submitted. We loved this title. We thought it spoke volumes about our thriller which was about the vestiges of Old South racism, forbidden love and death. But it wasn’t dark enough. It sounded like a romance.
Eliot’s third cat name is one that’s “particular, peculiar and more dignified.” This is the title your book really needs. For us, it was Dark of the Moon. We came upon that title after weeks of gnashing our teeth. I pulled my volume of Langston Hughes poems from the shelf and there was his poem “Silhouette” and our final title.
Southern gentle lady,
Do not swoon.
They’ve just hung a black man
In the dark of the moon.
They’ve hung a black man
To the roadside tree
In the dark of the moon
For the world to see
How Dixie protects
Its white womanhood.
Southern gentle lady,
I think some authors have “the title gene” and come up with the perfect names. Others lock onto signposts like Sue Grafton’s alphabet, John Sandford’s “Prey” or Evanovich’s numbers. Although I have to say I’m not crazy about this approach especially since it has spawned some lazy imitation gimmicks. (Hey, I’m going to write an erotic-suspense series! I just Googled condom names! Want to buy my book Vibrating Johnny?)
We’ve been lucky and have had to change only two of our titles. Maybe it’s because I used to write newspaper headlines so my brain is trained to take a story and smash it down into ten words or less that you can read from a passing car. I do know that authors struggle mightily with their titles. There’s even a award for the worst title -– and of course it’s awarded by the British.
Bookseller Magazine gave their prize this year to Reginald Bakeley for his book Goblinproofing One’s Chicken Coop – and Other Practical advice In Our Campaign Against the Fairy Kingdom. The runners-up were:
How Tea Cosies Changed the World.
God’s Doodle: The Life and Times of the Penis.
How to Sharpen Pencils.
Was Hitler Ill?
In twelve years of teaching workshops and doing critiques I’ve have seen maybe one title that I thought really captured the book’s tone. (It was our own Kathryn Lilly’s Dying To Be Thin.) So I know how hard this is. Here is my advice on titles, for what it’s worth:
- Capture your tone and genre. Go on Amazon and look up books similar to yours (cruise the genre bestseller lists). Words have inflection, mood and color. Choose them carefully.
- Grab the reader emotionally. Two titles that do it for me: The Unbearable Lightness of Being and The Spy Who Came in from the Cold
- Don’t settle for clichés. Yes, it’s hard to come up with fresh permutations on old standby words (especially in genre fiction where we rely on “dark” “blood” “death” etc.) But you have to find words that are unique about your story and draw upon them. Here’s a great title that twists a cliché word: Something Wicked This Way Comes.
- Don’t use empty arcane words that you think sound cool. Examples of bad titles: The Cambistry Conspiracy. (about world trade) The Hedonic Dilemma (about psychology ethics). Penultimate to Die. (the second-to-the-last victim). Don’t worry…I made these up.
- Create an expectation about the story. You know why I love this title: A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius? It makes me say, “Oh yeah, buddy? Show me!” and he does.
- Be brief and punchy. Okay, I know I just gave you a bunch of long titles I love but there is something wonderful about short titles and studies show most bestsellers have short titles: Gone Girl works. So does Tell No One, Lolita and Jaws (original title A Stillness in the Water).
- Make the title work on other levels. This is hard but worth the brain-sweat if you can do it. Consider what these titles come to mean once you get deep into the stories: Catch 22, Silence of the Lambs. But don’t get too clever. I love Louise Ure’s book Forcing Amaryllis and the title is brilliant because it is about a rape and murder. But do most understand that the title is from a gardening term about forcing a plant to bloom early? Not so sure.
- Make a list of key words that appear in your book. Is there something you can build on? For our book A Killing Rain, the title came when I heard a Florida farmer describe that drenching downpour that can kill off the tomato crop and we used it in the book. The title was there all the time and we didn’t see it at first.
- Search existing works — the Bible, poetry, Shakespeare. I found our title An Unquiet Grave in an 17th century English poem.
- Write 20 titles and let them sit for a week or so. Go back and read them and something will jump out. Find some beta-readers you can test with. Titles usually evoke visceral immediate responses. You will know immediately if they connect.
And last: Never get emotionally attached to a title. It’s the worst thing you can do because it probably will be changed. Or needs to be. Because your first title is usually, as T.S. Eliot said, a prosaic every-day thing. You can do better. It’s there. You just have to dig deep. Sweat out that great title that Eliot called the “ineffable, effable, effanineffable deep and inscrutable singular name.”
Answers to the quiz:
The Last Man in Europe (1984)
They Don’t Build Statues to Businessmen (Valley of the Dolls)
Fiesta (The Sun Also Rises)
At This Point in Time (All the President’s Men)
Wacking Off (Portnoy’s Complaint)
Great post, Kris. Love the quiz. My HarperCollins editor suggested titles to be 3-5 words. She thought that made them more unique and memorable. I’ve been fortunate to keep most of the titles I’ve suggested…or at least come up with alternatives that they used. Titles can also help you link a series by choosing the right key words.
A tip my YA editor does is to search on Amazon or the Internet to see if the title has been used on a previous book or is the name of a stripper, as was the case with my second book in my latest YA series, the Hunted. Apparently Crystal Storm has quite a fan base online. We had to change it to CRYSTAL FIRE. That title has been used quite a bit unfortunately, but not too recently. Because the idea of INDIGO and CRYSTAL children are very real names for the psychic kids I’ve researched, I had little choice, but searching Amazon or the Internet before you commit to a title is a good idea too.
I love your advice on not getting too attached to any one title and coming up with a list of potential titles you think over. I’ve seen some authors unable to start their book unless they have a title first. Not a good habit to get into, especially if an editor doesn’t like it and asks for a change.
Amotger thing I like to do is incorporate the title into a narrative or dialogue when it makes sense, so the reader has an aha moment.
Thanks for the great tips.
Yeah, you always have to do that dreaded title search once you have your own title. I remember one book we had in the pipeline with a title we loved…but our editor discovered a mega-author had a book coming out the same month with the same title. We came up with a new one!
Love this post. I am usually (at least in my own opinion) pretty good at crafting good titles for what turn out to be trunkers.
However, on my new WIP, the title is eluding me completely. That is what is making me think (hope, dream, insert verb) that I may have a winner here.
We’ve been there, Terri…that place where the title refused to reveal itself. I hate that because for some reason once I have the title, the writing goes faster and more smoothly. I think it’s because titles, when they are good, have magic within them. They are a crystalizaton of your true theme.
Amazong post. thank you! coming up with a title is like coming up with that perfect figure of speech. It’s what makes writing an art more than a science.
Thanks Sechin. Exactly so about figure of speech. All the good ones seem to be taken. But the best writers somehow find fresh ways of seeing the world and finding the words to describe it.
Great post, Kris, and thanks for the shootout about DYING TO BE THIN! I love coming up with titles, and I angst over them for months before settling on the final one. Titles draw me into picking up a book more than anything. I think they give you a vibe of the story and writing style to expect. A book can survive lousy cover art (I should know!), but not a lousy title.
I meant ‘shoutout’, lol. The iPad loves to change words!
I remember when I first opened your manuscript and there was the title and I thought, well, at least we’re off to a good start! And then I remember thinking, huh…this woman has a voice!
Hilarious post, Kris. I’d rather write an entire novel than one title. I wrote a wedding mystery where the mother of the bride was killed. I wanted to call it “One Dead Mother.” That was rejected as “too urban.” It became “Just Murdered.”
Ha! I still remmeber that road trip we took after Malice with Marcia…we spent hours trying to come up with a title for your book. I think we all failed!
Ah, but Kris…you can’t praise Bradbury for Something Wicked This Way Comes without a nod to Shakespeare in MACBETH, where it came from.
As for me, My protagonist is an ex-fighter nicknamed “Stone” because he hits hard, whose emotional flaw (okay, one of many) stems from a fight he “won” in England. His weight class? 205 lbs. In England, that’s Fifteen Stone, so that’s the title I’ve got for now. I like the ominous sound of it in my head, but mostly it was my wife convincing me. So we’ll see what it ends up being called if it ever makes it….
I kinda like the title. Does it work for your plot? And yeah, I know Ray cribbed from the Bard but don’t we all?
That’s the only area that’s gray, but I’m working on it.
And yeah, I steal from Shakespeare even while I’m teaching Shakespeare, so I guess we all do…
PJ, everything you say makes good sense. Especially your caution against becoming wedded to a title. It’s so easy to do. I have the first installment of a new mystery series about to be released as an ebook. I’ve lived with the story’s title for years, but delays in the formatting process forced me to look at the manuscript over and over again. I became aware of a nickname given to my central character–and I came to see it was what the title should be. I’m convinced this change will make a difference.
I think one more thing should be added to your remarks, and to the useful comments of others. This addition has special relevance for self-publishers: Any title that isn’t a great fit with a book’s cover art is the wrong title. The two have to work together, and this is a good part of the reason that led me to my Eureka! moment regarding the title change for my first Brenda Contay mystery. The old title was a good one, but only in isolation–it got nothing from and contributed nothing to the cover. Once the title and cover “fit,” I had a sense of parts clicking into place. Very satisfying.
Barry: So true about the marriage of cover image and title! I had a whole section on it but the post was getting out of control so I cut it. Another thing I cut: How we writers tend to be superstitious about our titles and don’t tell anyone.
It took quite a few permutations for several of my titles before I found one I liked that seemed to resonate with the story and sound cool. Except for 65 BELOW, that one came up first and stuck…and its my bestselling book by far. The title is drawn from the temperature for a significant part of the story. A number of folks have said they picked it up based on the title and the cover.
A harder choice I have with my WIP is that this is the beginning of a three or four book series which will have the same series title (currently ICE HAMMER)with a part title…those part/episode titles though I think will be trickier to sound neither common nor tacky.
Love 65 Below! It sounds sinister like a place you don’t want to find yourself in. Sort of like my own title South of Hell.
Bench press 420, you’re a hoss
was a hoss….now I’m a broke down old plow horse….decisions we make as youth…
I think I’ll just hire you to come up with a title for my next book! Usually I create a list of keywords associated with the story and the series and get one that way. I’ve only had one title changed by the publisher. Crew Cut became Killer Knots.
Nancy: Did you know there’s a guy out there who has a business coming up with titles? I was going to mention him but decided against it. So many cottage industries being spawned in self-pubbing’s wake.
Hmmm, when it is done, maybe I’ll ask y’all if there can be a contest and TKZ can name my book.
A contest is a great idea…but for readers. Whoever comes up with the winning title wins a signed print copy.
With some letters backwards
This reminds me of that TV show
never heard of it but hard to go wrong with Lucy Liu
Great post and I now know who to turn to when I come up with a crap title (which I almost always do!)