Put Some Saga in Your Stories

by James Scott Bell
@jamesscottbell

Around 850 A.D. a crew of Scandinavians was sailing around and got off course. They saw some land, and decided to check it out.

They didn’t know how cold this land could get, for if they had they might have turned right around and headed home. The place was packed with ice. “Let’s call it Iceland,” one of them said. And so it was claimed for good King Fairhair.

When word got to the king, he said, “The future is all about real estate. So let’s put in some family homes, a fish market or two, and a boat yard.”

The settlements began. It was hard at first to find a hospitable spot to set down roots. Whoever designed Iceland had put in lots of lava streams and glaciers, rocks and crags, and one strip mall with a tattoo parlor and the offices of the physician Dag “Dr. Leech” Gunnarsson.

Nevertheless, after several exploratory ventures, they found a place where at least the modicum of a village might be established.

But there was a modicum already there—with some strange fellows in cowls. These were Irish monks, who’d been there for over 100 years. These early inhabitants of Iceland were “Culdees.” Culdee comes from the Celtic Céile Dé, which means “God worshipper.” These monks lived lives of asceticism apart from human society, seeking entire sanctification. They had learned early, at least as far back as the 700s, that there’s not much sanctifying taking place in the world of human passions. Thus, they eschewed all video games, smart phones, talk shows, and Twitter.

The new settlers had to come up with their own form of entertainment. Life was taken up with catching foxes and ducks, reindeer and mice, whales and seals. These were often eaten at great feasts, where the conversation revolved mostly around the development of table manners. A century of this kind of palaver grew boring. So one night someone suggested, “Can somebody please tell a story?”

Thus was born the saga:

The original sagas were Icelandic prose narratives that were roughly analogous to modern historical novels. They were penned in the 12th and 13th centuries, and blended fact and fiction to tell the tales of famous rulers, legendary heroes, and average folks of Iceland and Norway. And they were aptly named: saga traces back to an Old Norse root that means “tale.” The English word first referred only to those original Icelandic stories, but saga later broadened to cover other narratives reminiscent of those, and the word was eventually further generalized to cover any long, complicated scenario.

According to the Encyclopedia Britannica, 1947 ed., the saga “in its purest form, extolled the life of a hero, governed by fixed rules, and intended for oral recitation.” The fixed rules were “simplicity of plot, chronological order of events, set phrases used even in describing the restless play of emotion or the changeful fortunes of a fight or a storm. The absence of digression, comment or intrusion of the narrator’s person is invariably maintained.”

Here you have plot, structure, restless emotions, and no author intrusion.

Further, these sagas display “the keen grasp of character, the biting phrase [style], the love of action and the delight in blood which almost assumes the garb of religious passion.”

The most popular of these oral tales were eventually written on scrolls. We have none of the originals, but copies that passed through various iterations: Editing and compounding (1220-1260), padding and amplifying (1260-1300), and the collection in large manuscripts (14th century).

Among the most famous Icelandic sagas are Vatzdaelasaga (890), relating to the settlement and chief family of Waterdale [historical fiction!]; Hord’s Saga, originally composed around 980 and telling the story of an outlaw named Hord [Anti-hero!].

We also have Havard (c. 1000), which recounts the titular character’s revenge for his son, murdered by a neighboring chief [revenge plot]; Heidarvigasaga (1015), the tale of a great blood feud [The Godfather, anyone?]; Eyrbyggia (1031), political intrigue; and Laxdaela (1026), a love triangle. Laxdaela features a female lead, Gudrun, who is the most famous of all Icelandic heroines. (Laxdaela spent forty weeks on the Icelandic Times bestseller list.)

All this goes to show how the fundamentals of storytelling seem innate throughout various cultures, and are still valid:

  1. A hero with whom we identify.
  2. A plot complication.
  3. Restless emotions.
  4. Action.
  5. Death stakes.
  6. Style (absent author intrusion). 

Saga has come to mean novel or series of novels that take place over a long period of time, usually in a historical context. The Trials of Kit Shannon is my saga series. I also wrote a long historical that covers World War I and takes us into 1920s Hollywood.

But the essence of saga, like that of myth, can apply to all genres of fiction. Think hero. Think big. Think action. Think emotions. Think death stakes (physical, professional, or psychological).

Most of all, think about telling a story to an audience that has worked hard hunting or fishing all day, and will fall asleep if you bore them!

21 thoughts on “Put Some Saga in Your Stories

  1. I think that’s why I prefer historical–I’m more likely to find fiction that has that saga feel. I’m at the beginning stages but I have a historical series that I hope will grow up to be an excellent series of novels that does just that. It’s a lot bigger challenge to carry an arc across multiple books than it is for stand-alones.

    The other interesting thing is it feels to me like the protag arc is more complex in a saga-type series, whereas some recurring protags in some series (such as traditional or cozy mystery) don’t change that much. Or at least that has been my impression. Maybe I’m just seeing it wrong.

    • That’s a good point, BK. Some series heroes change very little, if at all. James Bond, Reacher. But other authors manage to do it well, e.g., Connelly with Bosch. I tend to favor that kind of change.

  2. Excellent points. We can’t forget the basics. And yes, stories were originally oral, and it’s still a good idea to read your ms aloud to get the right feel.

    • A well known screenwriter used to gather friends for dinner, then tell them the story he was working on. He’d watch their reactions, to see where they squirmed, and rewrite accordingly.

  3. Terrific post, Jim. These six fundamentals of storytelling are truly timeless, and apply regardless of the scale and scope of your story, and work in any genre, be it historical, world spanning SF, fantasy, noir, cozy, romance etc.

  4. I enjoyed your story of the birth of the saga, Jim. Those Icelandic folks really knew how to tell a story.

    And thanks for the reminder of the six fundamentals of storytelling. It seems like such a simple list to remember, but implementing it–well, for me, that’s a lot harder.

    Do you suppose “sagacious” comes from the same root as “saga”?

  5. Jim, why weren’t you teaching my history classes instead of boring Mr. Benson? I wouldn’t have nodded off.

    Thanks for the lesson in fun and fundamentals!

  6. Evidence now suggests that the Vikings were in Nova Scotia and the US around 600 AD, and a piece of what may be a Viking ship has been found on Oak Island, NS, from around 300 AD. Those guys knew how to travel.

    The same rules of the saga were followed by the Sumerian (1600 – c. 1155 BC) GILGAMESH, the ancient Greeks’ THE ILIAD (800 BC) and THE ODYSSEY, then by the Roman AENID. Storytelling like this is beyond cultures. The repetitive descriptions were aids for verbal storytelling. “Wine dark sea,” anyone.

  7. Great stuff, Jim. I’ve been a history buff since I was in grade school. I had a great history teacher in high school, who made us keep a spiral-bound notebook of historical stories that interested us. I loved the way he taught.

    Of late, I’ve become fascinated with the history of words and phrases, even how common products got their names.

    My next blog post (4/11) is a short one about how Bluetooth got it’s name. If you don’t know that story, just go to Wikipedia, or here’s a link to a Bluetooth website.

    https://www.bluetooth.com/about-us/bluetooth-origin/.

    Happy Easter, all!

    • That’s a great article, Terry. And I agree with it. Originally the stories were meant to help a tribe have courage in order to stay alive. Centuries later, the Greeks added the inculcation of virtue to the mix. John Gardner coined the term “moral fiction” as giving a vision of life as it should be, rather than just ” staring, because it is fashionable, into the abyss.”

      I think we have a bit too much of the latter these days. Count me out.

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