Truth and Consequences

by Simon Wood

I put myself in a tricky position with my latest book, DID NOT FINISH. With most of my books, it’s inspired by something that happened in the real life. But whereas there’s usually a little distance between myself and incident, this time there wasn’t. I was there at the time of the incident.

In the 90’s, I was a competitive racecar driver. At the end of my third season, one of the drivers threatened to kill another driver unless he let him winning the championship deciding race. Word of this threat spread through the paddock like wildfire. No one took the threat seriously. It was just talk. That went out of the window when those two driver touched wheels during the race and the threatened driver died. Some odd things happened in the aftermath of the crash, such as edited TV coverage and a seemingly nonexistent police investigation. It was all very puzzling to a number of us who’d heard and seen things.

I’d always said I would write about the incident, but writing the book proved much harder than I’d ever expected. The problem was that I was too close to the source material. When I wrote about viatical settlements for ACCIDENTS WAITING TO HAPPEN and a series of suicides for WE ALL FALL DOWN, I spun a story around some very bare facts to construct a book that had very little in common with the facts. The problem with the early drafts of DNF was that it was autobiographical which made the novel very dull as it was way too personal and to be frank, not that entertaining. My problems were compounded by my thinly veiled attempts to hide the identities of actual people. I had hoped that in the 20 years since the actual incident went down that many of the characters were still very much involved with the sport. Then there was the victim and his family to consider. I’m sure they wouldn’t appreciate me raking up old memories. At the end of the day, as much I think I know what happened, I only had my perspective on events and not a complete picture and to make any insinuation was reckless. The upshot was the book ground to a halt

After a long chat with my wife, we got to the heart of the matter—stop trying to rewrite history and write a novel. I had to do what I always do when I use something real to write a work a fiction. Incorporate the essence and leave the rest. Once I unshackled myself of any responsibility to tell the truth, the book became easier to write. I developed characters with some real depth and history. The plot went off in a direction that real life never went. And all in all, I have a book I’m very proud of.

The tough thing about writing, even with fiction, is that it’s a role that comes with responsibilities. You can’t just say anything and say it’s okay because it’s made up. Words are as powerful as bullets and you need to be careful where you aim before firing. And that’s the truth.

Simon Wood is an ex-racecar driver, a licensed pilot and an occasional private investigator. Simon has had over 150 stories and articles published. His short fiction has appeared in a variety of magazines and anthologies, and has garnered him an Anthony Award and a CWA Dagger Award nomination, as well as several readers’ choice awards. He’s a frequent contributor to Writer’s Digest. He’s the author of WORKING STIFFS, ACCIDENTS WAITING TO HAPPEN, PAYING THE PIPER, WE ALL FALL DOWN, TERMINATED and ASKING FOR TROUBLE. As Simon Janus, he’s the author of THE SCRUBS and ROAD RASH. His latest book is DID NOT FINISH.

9 thoughts on “Truth and Consequences

  1. Hey Simon. Great to see you on TKZ. The new book sounds intriguing. The world of car racing is a compelling, adrenaline-filled backdrop for crime fiction. And with your real experiences, that should make for a thrilling read. Wow!

    It’s interesting how you revised your first approach, realizing it wasn’t working. I bet you clocked plenty of sofa time with the dachsunds & bags of chips. How difficult was that? (Not the sofa time.) How much did you gave to ditch and what was your process for reinventing a story you had an insider scoop on? That had to be a challenge.

  2. Good post. The worst scenes I’ve read in my writer’s group are the ones a writer defends by saying, “but it really happened that way.” Maybe so, but the writing was lifeless and unconvincing.

    Oh, and thanks for making me run to the dictionary to look up “viatical,” lol.

  3. Hi Simon, welcome to TKZ. Funny how life and fiction can get so mixed up sometimes isn’t it? Sounds like your book is a very interesting read.

    Reality seems often to be a harder sell than stuff we make up. A couple years ago when I was trying to sell my novel 65 Below an agent insisted I remove references to a 9.2 earthquake as that was “not possible. Likewise the protagonist mentions enduring -70f. While she was adamant that such things were not possible, I had to insist on keeping them in, because they’re real. The 9.2 was what we call the “Good Friday Quake” and happened March 27, 1964. While that was a couple years before I was born I did endure a 7.9 in 2003, you can see .pictures of what it did here. Luckily that tremblor was centered 300 km north of Anchorage in the middle of nowhere, but it still turned over shelves in my uncles General Store in Salcha (about 150 miles west of the epicenter) and caved in the foundation of the old colonial government building (now the Matanuska Susitna Borough Building) I worked at in Palmer, AK. As far as -70f, yeah…I still have the ache in my toes from the frostbit on that one. Only nice thing about temps like that is that splitting firewood is easy…just throw hard onto the ground and it shatters.

    On the other hand, my novel “Karl’s Last Flight”
    which was totally fictitious was ranted about in Iranian newspapers. Here’s the link to my blog post on it, with a link to the Farsi newspaper article. Apparently they think I am a propaganda arm of the US government bent on making Iran look bad. The only fact based parts of that story were the names of a province and the nation itself. Sadly, while they decry me as a bad guy, I have not attained Salman Rushdie like fame and fortune as of yet…of course, maybe that’s a good thing since that means there’s not a fatwa on me…yet.

    At any rate, reality and fiction do indeed make strange bed-fellows.

    Win a free audiobook version of my Audie Award nominated “Karl’s Last Flight”, every entry gets a free copy of the ebook version of KLF! Oh…while you’re at it, enter to win a free Kindle! Details at http://www.basilsands.com

  4. Jordan: I would say it’s the toughest book I’ve written b/c i had to peel fact from fiction to let the story grow. It’s why it took 5 yrs and 3 attempts to write it. There was a lot of long talks with my animals.

    Kathryn: Don’t say you didn’t learn anything.

    By the by, Michelle named her child after my cat.

    Simon

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