First Page Critique – The Scribe’s Boy

By Debbie Burke @burke_writer   Let’s welcome another Brave Author who submitted today’s first page for critique, entitled The Scribe’s Boy. Please enjoy reading and we’ll discuss this on the flip side. ~~~ The worst thing about a beating is how … Continue reading

First Page Critique: Envy Rots Your Bones

Another brave writer shared their first page for critique. Enjoy! My comments will follow. Chapter One Envy Rots Your Bones Grandma Iris had never cradled me like she did that Bible. Sat across the table, she held it tight to … Continue reading

First Page Critique: City of Caves

My apologies to the brave writer who submitted this first page for critique. I meant to do it sooner, but I’ve had an insanely busy October. The writer says the genre is paranormal/horror. My comments will follow.   City of … Continue reading

First Page Critique: Side Effects

Another brave writer submitted their first page for critique. Enjoy! I’ll catch ya on the flip side. Title: Side Effects Genre: Psychological Thriller All he could hear was the thunder of rushing blood, only distantly aware of the sharp, bright … Continue reading