When Verbs Go Rogue: First Page Critique

Another brave writer submitted their first page for critique. My comments will follow. Monstruo Cubano Once inside La Libreria de Juan Carlos, Brook Harper squeaked in horror. She gaped at the rows of mildewed shelves lined not with books, but … Continue reading

Deep Dive into Craft: First Page Critique

I’ve got a special treat for you today. This Brave Writer submitted their first page for critique. Check it out. My comments will follow. Lucky Lynx Eduardo’s gun gleamed in the evening light as he tucked it into his shoulder … Continue reading

Where Am I? — First Page Critique

By SUE COLETTA Another brave writer submitted their first page for critique. I’ll catch ya on the flipside. Enjoy! TITLE: Sonbgird chapter 1 I stood alone, ready to jump. A slow wavering breath parted my lips. I gripped the sides … Continue reading