by James Scott Bell @jamesscottbell Today we have another of our first-page critiques, this one with the title Darkness and Blood. Let’s have a look and discuss it on the other side. A few minutes past midnight in the south … Continue reading
Jordan Dane @jordandane Don your fedora and breathe in the smoky air of a shadowy life when you read this anonymous submission of 400 words for THE DANGEROUS DAME. My feedback will be on the flip side. Please share your … Continue reading
By SUE COLETTA Calling all fantasy lovers! Please enjoy today’s offering from another brave writer. I’ll catch you on the flip-side with my comments. The Arthani Prince The Arthani palace was much smaller than the Razvian one, but what it … Continue reading
by Debbie Burke @burke_writer Please welcome today’s Brave Author who’s submitted a first page entitled: Zip&Milly: Siberian Adventure “Raccoon” — an inquisitive legal assistant from Ducklingburg, U.S.A., appeared in the car of a speeding Siberian commuter rail quite unexpectedly. Appeared being … Continue reading
By PJ Parrish I love stories about outer space. Maybe it goes back to when I got to be the papier-mâché planet Venus in an third-grade play. And in the Fifties, I remember being enthralled with a book called You … Continue reading
Jordan Dane @JordanDane For your reading enjoyment is another brave author open to feedback. My comments will follow. Feel free to share your constructive criticism in your comments. Let’s nurture this author, TKZers. *** The words, sprayed in red, dripped … Continue reading
Today let’s welcome another Brave Anonymous Author who offers the first page of Heil Safari. Title: Heil Safari Captain Martin Beyer wondered in alarm how he could save his friend’s life. His friend, Second Lieutenant Hans Fritz, was in danger … Continue reading
Jordan Dane @JordanDane I’ve written a few sub-genres, but the most different or diverse ones I’ve attempted were writing mainstream thrillers and young adult novels. I’ve always loved reading crime fiction (my big umbrella), so my comfort reads were always … Continue reading
By PJ Parrish Get ready, because we’ve got a lot of action in today’s First Page submission. Explosions! Body parts! Fiery cars! Whew… I’ll be back in a…uh, a flash and we’ll talk about this. Ice Hammer: Invincible A blinding … Continue reading
By PJ Parrish Get ready, because we’ve got a lot of action in today’s First Page submission. Explosions! Body parts! Fiery cars! Whew… I’ll be back in a…uh, a flash and we’ll talk about this. Ice Hammer: Invincible A blinding … Continue reading